DON'T LOOK BACK

Louis Gibbs

 

So much loss

So much loss

Don't look back

So much loss

  • Author: Louis Gibbs (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 19th, 2017 07:36
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is exactly what spilled out of me from deep within when suddenly triggered by a heartbreaking passage in a very moving novel I was reading. I was sobbing.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 39
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Comments6

  • orchidee

    A fine write L. Erm, take a step or two forward then!

    • Louis Gibbs

      Thank you, orchidee. That's all we can do, isn't it.

    • Michael Edwards

      So simple, so effective. Often the hardest to write - I love it.

      • Louis Gibbs

        Thanks so much, Michael!

      • Goldfinch60

        Good write, so much said in few words. Go forward towards the light.

        • Louis Gibbs

          That's what we do, all of us. Thanks for your comment, Goldie.

        • avigail

          embrace love infinite energy of compassion and wisdom

          • Louis Gibbs

            Thank you so much, Avigail.

          • FredPeyer

            Louis, your four lines say a lot more than a whole novel sometimes does.
            Great!

            • Louis Gibbs

              A high compliment indeed! Thank you so much, Fred.

            • Christina8

              I commend you for writing such a moving piece in such few words. I too believe it's best not to look back.

              • Louis Gibbs

                I guess it all depends on what lies back there. Thank you so much for this encouraging comment.



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