It's silent but it's so alive.
It's cold but it's real.
It's dark yet it's beautiful.
It's everything I feel.
As I breath in the air,
It satisfies my soul!
Once yearned for inspiration,
of which the dullness stole.
I was walking with a blinded heart,
But slowly it gained it's sight,
There's more to the world
Than I'd known
Like the stars are out tonight.
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Author:
Ljneedham08 (
Offline) - Published: July 19th, 2017 16:33
- Comment from author about the poem: This has been written after having writers block for months, it's about trying so hard to find something that's merely impossible to find and not seeing what's right in front of you. Sometimes it's just the simple things are what makes life really amazing.
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A great initial contribution to the site! Welcome, Lj. This poem speaks much wisdom.
Thank you Louis! 🙂
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Love the style ~ twinkling with rhyme & rhythm ! Love the subject (and the picture) "The Stars are out Tonight !" Your poem starts a bit melancholy ~ but then burst into life ~ WHY ? Because the Stars sure are out Tonight ! When in doubt never look down (it will make you down !) always look up and you will be amazed at what you see ~ Because the Stars are out Tonight ~ AWESOME ! Love the poem thanks for sharing ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
Welcome to MPS! What a beautiful poem! So glad you overcame your writers block. And a great pic too! Great job!
Thank you Christina I'm happy to be here! I always get writers block but there's always ways to over come it 🙂
Good write, The stars can be so inspiring, may they always shine on you.
They can be, the sky is full of inspiration 🙂 thank you Goldfinch60
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