Eden is Here, Eden is here,
We just need to uncover, expose and reveal.
When we ate from the knowledge apple tree,
Our egos grew and we thought we were free.
But then Creator said:” you can acquire knowledge as much as you want,
Yet wisdom of creation is completely different from what you have thought.
Mystery of life is hidden in the tree of life.
And because you were arrogant, you will battle and strife."
The only hint I will give you – a tip if you will:
Multi-minds’ insights’ sparks, will uncover that Eden is here, still.
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AVIGAIL (Pseudonym) (
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Despite the iconoclasts AVI ~ there is TRUTH in your thesis ! If we optimise ourselves (and are in touch with our Creator) then Earth (especially the English lake District ) is EDEN ~ Paradise Regained ~ AMEN ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN
if we collaborate as Multi-Minds - we will solve all problems Brain - love and hugs
Yes indeed AVI because the cooperative TOTAL of the whole is always greater than the mere TOTAL of the individual parts ! This applies to Families ~ Corporations and Communities ! Thanks for clarifying the concept of MULTI-MINDS ~ Collaborative Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN (always with AVI !)
I agree with you Avi, look at ants or bees, they could not function individually. While some decisions made by committee don't work, others do need your 'multi-mind'. As the saying goes...if we put our heads together...and then pull in the same direction, maybe, just maybe, this could be a better place. As far as writing poems is concerned though, one better do it alone.
I do like your poem.
thanks FredPeyer you are so right ... we just dont see it all (my previous poem :)) be well
You know Avi, the sad part, I think, is that this multi-mind will never happen. Too much ego and self-interest. Unless.....all of us on this earth are threatened by something bigger than us or not from this world. Just look how people CAN work together for the common good during a disaster.
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People working together for one aim is a great idea but there are always one or two who want more and they create disharmony. Good write.
so Goldfinch60 , how do be bring back harmony without violence ?
Throw out the politicians?
Even with communism where all were supposedly all working together there were still people who craved power and ruined it all.
Some communes seem to work, perhaps we poets should form our own commune on an island somewhere and call it Paradise, I'll do the cooking.
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