New Appetite.
A lust full of Karma passed and eagerness lessened.
The honied moon of strong passion a weaker light shed.
Love turned to pages of lies until ,cage ajar, the bird fled.
Rules burnt desire's new appetite revived no false pretense.
Lit again female eyes felt hunger that quenched past neglect.
Prized then the nectar fired by another with not a sign of regret.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Category: Reflection
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Comments7
in with the new, and another page. Good job, Fay.
And a super write it is
A concise beauty, beautifully shaped! This one satisfies my order-driven soul. Thank you, Fay for rendering this gorgeous poem of love kindled anew.
Move on ~ He's a chapter in the past
Don't close the book
Just turn the page !
I love it Fay ~ it is a new sentiment for you !
Unrequited Love ~ Cage ajar ~ The bird fled !
BUT ~ New desire ~ New appetite Female eyes
Lit again and full of hunger ~ Prized then the nectar
Fired by another ~ with not a sign of regret !
This is so so sensuous FAY and gives hope to
all who have Loved & Lost ~ To Love again !
Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
A fine write F.
Fay, you have a way with words, and there is 'not a sign of regret' for having read your beautiful poem.
No regrets never for come here and read your poems. Each time a better read. Thank you so much.
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