Great weather

Renzi



We've received great weather
Here in my wee land
So i'll eat delicious lollies
And top up on my tan

  • Author: Renzi Mars (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 24th, 2017 09:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: Short and sweet 💓 ps. I love the sunshine.
  • Category: Short story
  • Views: 35
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  • Louis Gibbs

    What better way to spend a day? A cute contribution to my day. Thanks, Renzi.

    • Renzi

      It was a day well spent .. until i decided to shave my dog 😮 haha

      • Louis Gibbs

        I won't ask how that turned out. Thanks for another laugh.

        • Renzi

          Lets just say she can kick like a ninja , spit like a camel and IS the modern day Harry Houdini haha! Rascal! Never again!

        • Michael Edwards

          Great fun piece R

          • Renzi

            Gracious lovely 💓

          • burning-embers

            Jeez what a life! Few days ago it was street parties and booze, then it was MORE booze,and oh yeah then there was ooppss i got drunk again (hic) and now its ice lollies and great weather! No wonder she writes mind boggling stuff, she's off her tree. (But it's all in the best paaassible taste!).

            • Renzi

              What can i say im irish haha!! I guess thats the joys of living life day by day eh :p ya just never know what tomorrow brings .... pray for sun ... sunnnn

            • charlesbarrett

              Wonderfully expressed. Enjoy your beautiful weather. Thanks for sharing

              • Renzi

                Sharing is caring 🙊 im glad you enjoyed 😊❤

              • FredPeyer

                Envy you, here in sunshine land it is raining today. And we don't eat lollies, we eat shave ice. Always looking forward to your contributions. It's become kind of my daily fix!

              • Renzi

                No way, theres no sun ? Wellllllll!!!! Thankyou for sending it across the pond haha! Shaved ice, ice cubes? Surely they should be crushed and added to a cocktail? :p Awh this makes me happy 🙂

                • FredPeyer

                  Check out Matsumoto Shave Ice located on the North Shore here on Oahu. They are famous! Usually long lines out the door.
                  http://matsumotoshaveice.com/

                • Christina8

                  Great to see you having a relaxed time. I am finally having nice weather too! Glad to see you are happy today.

                  • Renzi

                    I hope you're out there enjoying that fine sunshine too. Much love C 💓

                  • malubotelho

                    Renzi, I'm happy to see you happy 😊 here was so much rain that our yard almost turned to be a big pond. The good thing is that one can sleep listening to the melody of the frogs. They sing really cute.

                    • Renzi

                      Awhhh i love little frogs 💓 and you know the only time i've seen a frog was when i 'lived' in London.. the cutest little baby! I hope the sun comes out soon.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Super fun write, enjoy your life and lollies.

                      • Renzi

                        Trying my dear darnest. Hey hey the suns out again yay yay 😊



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