I know I’ve fallen deeper
Since you left me broken
Clinging on to final hope
Please say we haven’t lost it
My beating heart in one piece
But with cracks in-between
Blood seeping through
Starting to make me see
The painful truth that lies beneath
Stinging me like a ray
I try not to think that way
Only remember the good
Who you used to be
Not the uncontrollable change
That left me in tears throughout the night
Only because of our unspoken goodbye
We both know you walked away
For no reason has been explained
You said you loved me
But that must be a mistake
If you felt that way
You wouldn’t have thrown me away
Just seeing your face
Turns me to ashes
In the laughter of your flames
Somehow I feel to blame
Maybe I should leave now
Maybe I should walk away
Before I’m broken by anymore pain
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Author:
ShannonXx (
Offline) - Published: July 26th, 2017 10:47
- Category: Love
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Comments8
Beautifully expressed. My favorite lines were
“just seeing your face
Turns me to ashes
In the laughter of your flames”
Very nice piece. May you find true love that won’t cause this pain. Thanks for sharing
Thank you 😊
Love is strange people are stranger
nice expression here
True! And thanks
Shannon, these boots are made for walking! Great poem with a strong message. Replace 'Maybe' with 'I will'.
Thank you 😊
Heartfelt very poetic nicely done
Thanks ☺️
Beautiful expression of love and pain. Great writing.
Thank you!!
you learn from many things in life which maybe the right thing for you. when you wrote 'stinging like a ray' I thought to myself now that's a powerful statement because sting rays can be deadly so you know now not to go near a stingray. you must learn by your mistakes and if being in pain caused by your heart then you need to move away from it. I would hate to see you suffer anymore. that's why I said what I said. good luck and I love the way you write by the way. it's great.
I agree with your point! and thank you
Wonderfully emotive write. You must move forward.
Thank you
Endings create opportunities for new beginnings. Always be positive about your future. Treat the past as your seat of learning. Nice writing.
I agree and thanks!!
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