Break my heart even more
I see that as cry for help
You see that as a challenge
Though our point of view differs
I still feel like no one understands me
Like you did
You made me cry
Night after night
Wondering what I did to cause you to be like that
Wondering what happened to the guy I once knew
The guy I once loved
The guy I still loved
Call me stupid
Call me crazy
I call it love
Blinded by the thought that one day you’ll get better
I waited and waited
Love for you is the only reason I stayed
I should’ve left ages ago
But I felt that I needed you
I only knew of happiness when I was with you
Our deep conversations
About my darkest fears
Made me trust you more than I trusted anyone else
Right now I feel stupid
Because I still love you
And I know you don’t feel the same way anymore
I know you don’t care
But oh, I wish you did
I wish we could go back
And do things like we should’ve done
When we were both in love
No games
No gimmicks
Just us
But one can only hope
And I’m sick of having hope
For someone that could care less
Fuck you
Fuck us
I’m done
Or I’m trying to be done
Say goodbye to the girl you once knew
Because pain and terrible circumstances
Destroyed me
Not saying you was the only cause for the damage
But you caused a great deal
A part of me wishes I never met you
But another part feels blessed
To have encountered you
You were the best of a bad situation
You showed me love and acceptance
But also pain and embarrassment
I guess we were too young
To realize what love truly was
I just realized too late
And you forgot too early
Early enough to where I still have feelings
And you have none
I try to have new relationships
But I still feel myself missing you
Listening to songs
Thinking of you
Imagining a life where we worked out
But I had high hopes
And you had a record of failure
So let’s say goodbye
But let’s make it worth something
Tell me what went wrong
And I’ll make sure to learn from my mistakes
Cause I’ll burn in hell
Before I let myself love another "you"
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Author:
Ariana Briggs (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is about loving someone who doesn\\\'t love you back. There is a history. but times have changed and now there is no way you and him/her to be together.
- Category: Love
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Comments3
Damn, I really like that closer
Potent nice job poetess
Thank you so much! And I'm glad you like it
Thanks ARIANA ~ for another beautiful LOVE POEM that only an ALABAMA GIRL could write ! I have a MANTRA ~ "Better to have loved and lost ~ than never to have loved at all" I've had my share of "ended love affairs" but each one has made me stronger and I have learned positive lessons from each one ~ and your final triplet implies you have too. You are lovely and deserve "True Love" Thinkin' of you an' prayin' for you ! Yours BRIAN (UK) We have a sayin' for the Girls from every US State ALABAMA ~ "Girls from ALAMBAMA just want to take you home to meet MAMA !" For me that is a POSITIVE because Girls grow up to be like their MAMAS and Alabama Mums are all lovely !
I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem because I wrote this is the middle of the night when I could barely sleep. To me it explains how relationships can be either great or disastrous. One day I might have true love, and hopefully he'll like this "Alabama girl"! And your saying is completely true lol
That was amazing. I love how the emotion changed throughout. Beautiful and heartbreaking.
I wanted to express my heartbreak in a way to where other people could relate. And I'm sooo glad that you liked it.
I did... very much so. You're very talented.
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