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Stranger

I set eyes on my own blood but it's as though I'm looking at a stranger
Why is this Middle Aged man calling himself my father?
The only father I've ever known is my broken hearted mother
Picking up all the pieces when our family was shattered

Torn hearts, teary eyes is all she sees
Falling to her knees hoping God would hear her plea
She doesn't know how she became a part of this tragedy
Praying these obstacles wont turn her to insanity

Who do you call in times of need?
The father feels no love towards his seed
A single mother on her own, four mouths to feed
She's stuck in a world that only knows of greed

 

Comments6

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem which tells a tragic ! A deserting Father and a broken hearted "single parent Mother" with four mouths to feed ! The Authorities (in the UK) are short of Cash ~ but I am praying for you that GOD in His Mercy will provide ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

  • ACS

    Good use of the end rhymes in the work it ties each line together beautifully

  • Brycycle

    Well written poem, i feel like this is a true story? If it is, I wish all the best to you.

  • myself and me

    Did you see any fear or worry in your four-month baby? Of course not, since he/she has faith in you. If this is the worst time in your life, then things will getting better everyday. You are a brave mom. nice writing.

  • Louis Gibbs

    A good poem about a sad subject, 'thought'! Welcome to MPS. Keep writing.

  • Goldfinch60

    Good write on such a sad subject. Welcome to MPS.



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