I died of loneliness
for I spent my life
giving myself away.
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Whisperingquill (Pseudonym) (
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Strong piece - a big tick from me.
Beautiful wording WQ, but for once I cannot agree with what it says. I honestly think that the ones who do NOT give anything away will die of loneliness. But you know, these are the thoughts of a doddering old fool, you must have had your reasons.
Good emotive write.
I don't think I can agree with this, sorry. I give myself away and I'm never lonely because it is always someone that wants a bit. It is almost not enough for everybody. Beautiful writing though.
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