Mely Hriscu

I watched

I watched you fall asleep

Dream on

Fly away from reality.

 

I watched you laugh

With your eyes full of joy

And your teeth brighter than the sun.

 

I watched you cry

And wipe away the tears with your palms

Then never look back at me.

 

I watched you die

From my memory

And never hear you talk again.

Comments5

  • Accidental Poet

    Separations are never easy on the heart. Well written.

  • BRIANSODES

    WELCOME MELY ~ Thanks for your first Poem. Well written in excellent English ~ but with a sad message. It is always a sad day when someone we love ~ passes into Eternity ! Love Romania ~ beautiful Country' I have visited Bucharest Transylvania and Constanta on the Coast. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

    • Mely Hriscu

      Thank you so much!

    • Louis Gibbs

      You certainly have the necessary command of the language to be a good poet, and by your first offering here I'd classify you as exactly that, Mely. Welcome to MPS!

      • Mely Hriscu

        Thank you, I really appreciate your comment!

      • FredPeyer

        Welcome on MPS, Mely. This is a well written poem, full of emotion, but kinda sad. Who said relationships are easy? Please keep on writing, would like to read more from you.

      • Michael Edwards

        Beautiful write - a pleasure to read.



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