I watched

Mel Marz

I watched you fall asleep

Dream on

Fly away from reality.

 

I watched you laugh

With your eyes full of joy

And your teeth brighter than the sun.

 

I watched you cry

And wipe away the tears with your palms

Then never look back at me.

 

I watched you die

From my memory

And never hear you talk again.

  • Author: Mel Marz (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 12th, 2017 17:04
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 35
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  • Accidental Poet

    Separations are never easy on the heart. Well written.

    • Mel Marz

      Thank you!

      • Accidental Poet

        You're welcome, and welcome to MPS.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        WELCOME MELY ~ Thanks for your first Poem. Well written in excellent English ~ but with a sad message. It is always a sad day when someone we love ~ passes into Eternity ! Love Romania ~ beautiful Country' I have visited Bucharest Transylvania and Constanta on the Coast. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

        • Mel Marz

          Thank you so much!

        • Louis Gibbs

          You certainly have the necessary command of the language to be a good poet, and by your first offering here I'd classify you as exactly that, Mely. Welcome to MPS!

          • Mel Marz

            Thank you, I really appreciate your comment!

          • FredPeyer

            Welcome on MPS, Mely. This is a well written poem, full of emotion, but kinda sad. Who said relationships are easy? Please keep on writing, would like to read more from you.

            • Mel Marz

              Thank you!

            • Michael Edwards

              Beautiful write - a pleasure to read.

              • Mel Marz

                Thank you!



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