The moment you into my sight
The waiting is end
Feel like an old friend
Long time no seen
So much to tell
Yet no words are said
Holding your hand
Leave the lonely time behind
Along the path ahead
You and I
Side by side
PS: for the last three sentences, I have other version, not sure which fit better, list them below.
option 1
Along the journey ahead
You will be
Companied by me
option 2
Along the path ahead
You will have me
By your side
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Author:
myself and me (
Offline) - Published: August 12th, 2017 20:22
- Comment from author about the poem: True love is absolutely worth the long waiting.
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Comments6
I like option 2 best. Overall a great poem.
Thank you for your opinion. I am glad you like it.
You're very welcome.
Good write and yes option 2 is the better one but all are good.
Thank you for your input.
I would write poems for all three they could all be their own entities...nice poem
Thanks. That is very nice of you.
mam, I do like your poem. As for the ending, I like the one in the poem the best. Options 1 and 2 are good as well though.
Thank you for letting me know your thought. Love yours too.
Yup - option 2 for me - a delightful write .
Thank you for reading and comment.
its just my opinion, but you left me with no option, its just gotta be option two ........... Neville
Thank you for taking the effort to pick yours.
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