Dark smokey
jazzy blues
Heartbreak music
or music drenched in romance
laughter drifting
out to the
neon haze of the street
dusty reds
deep river greens
midnite blue
reflecting up from a
light rain
the sounds of many
dancing feet
a tenor sax wailed
the night alive around them
amazing blue notes
hot , close exhilarating
Bluesman Jazzman
in the dark pleasure
of one more dance
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Author:
WL (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 16th, 2017 09:14
- Comment from author about the poem: Picture is a guitar that I built as a tribute to the Bluesmen .... poem also is suppose to evoke the spirit of the jazz and blues players
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Comments7
The color Blue, ahhhhh. So nice. Well done.
Thanks Nicholas
The whole scene is in my mind - a great write.
Thanks Michael, I've been looking at your art ... splendid
Having seen yours that is indeed great praise = thanks so much.
Beautiful
Thanks Tony
Welcome
You are such a talented person. Love that guitar. Blue notes is filling the air now.
Wonderful jazz poem.
Thanks M I was going for a jazzy feel glad you caught it
Wonderful write evoking the blues in my mind.
Love the guitar.
Thanks I appreciate your comments
Deep river greens, wow I like your poetic phrasing throughout. Describes and expressed superbly. Very poetic as well. Kudos.
Pls
Do have a look at my writings too, But comment only on the one u like best. I write on many sites and they do enjoy my poetry or get Sth from it.
Thanks much
Wow such a good poem and the guitar is gorgeous!
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