She left

myself and me

She left 

Followed by my soul

Nothing inside

But a big hole

 

 

PS: reading   Aa Harvey's "I have nothing", this came into my mind.

  • Author: myself and me (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 17th, 2017 21:24
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments4

  • Nicholas Browning

    It's simple. Has a good taste though. Well played.

    • myself and me

      Thank you for stopping by and commenting.

    • FredPeyer

      Creativity at it's best! Read one, then write one!
      You are amazing mam (can I say mam, myself and me is too long to type)
      And here is my take:

      She left
      followed by my money
      empty wallet
      ain't not funny

      • myself and me

        mam works for me. Your lost is not funny, but your poem is.

        • FredPeyer

          Thank you mam, it never happened to me, just my crazy imagination! 🙂

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        • Aa Harvey

          This is beautiful. She took my soul with her. Perfect.

        • Michael Edwards

          Great shortie m&m

          • myself and me

            Try to follow the "short" trend. Thanks.



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