Surrounded by deep water, he needs only a clear bottle to quench thirst, till he reaches the distant shore.
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Malu (Pseudonym) (
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Surrounded by deep water, he needs only a clear bottle to quench thirst, till he reaches the distant shore.
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Trapped out in the deep. Cool stuff.
Thanks for reading Nicholas. Very appreciated.
Thanks MALU ~ God has promised to supply all our needs ~ but not our greeds ! Love the PIC & POEM ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN Please check my new FUSION on Animals ~ Thank B.
Thank you so much brother Brian
A gem it is indeed
Thanks Michael, coming from you that is the master I feel really glad that you like it.
I know that feeling, you could have written this just for me right now..... oh how i need that clear bottle. Teaser!
I think you need more than just a bottle of water, you need a full spring to conquer your thirst.
Well i'll take a spring for now Malu, but i really need spring, summer, autumn (fall) and winter. All from one beautifully curved container. Any suggestions?
You can say: I'm burning my embers thinking about her.
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I traced her curve with my compass, she made a perfect circle around my..........
Beautiful view with stunning words.
Love it.
Thanks mm, I appreciate your comments.
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