Thirst

malubotelho

Surrounded by deep water,                             he needs only a clear bottle to quench thirst,    till he reaches the distant shore.

  • Author: Malu (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 18th, 2017 10:38
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 30
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Comments5

  • Nicholas Browning

    Trapped out in the deep. Cool stuff.

    • malubotelho

      Thanks for reading Nicholas. Very appreciated.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks MALU ~ God has promised to supply all our needs ~ but not our greeds ! Love the PIC & POEM ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN Please check my new FUSION on Animals ~ Thank B.

      • malubotelho

        Thank you so much brother Brian

      • Michael Edwards

        A gem it is indeed

        • malubotelho

          Thanks Michael, coming from you that is the master I feel really glad that you like it.

        • burning-embers

          I know that feeling, you could have written this just for me right now..... oh how i need that clear bottle. Teaser!

          • malubotelho

            I think you need more than just a bottle of water, you need a full spring to conquer your thirst.

            • burning-embers

              Well i'll take a spring for now Malu, but i really need spring, summer, autumn (fall) and winter. All from one beautifully curved container. Any suggestions?

              • 2 more comments

            • myself and me

              Beautiful view with stunning words.
              Love it.

              • malubotelho

                Thanks mm, I appreciate your comments.



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