Empyrean eyes
these two brilliant-hued sapphires –
flashing in my mind.
Flashing in my mind
like burning stars, eyes aglow –
a sunbeam in each.
A sunbeam in each
glimmering bright rays of light –
penetrating deep.
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rrodriguez (
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very smooth. perfect poetry in motion,
Thank you Kevin for reading my poem. Thank you for your visit.
Great piece of writing and love the way you liked them by repeating the last line.
Indeed, a most appreciative comment. Thank Michael.
Beautiful write.
Thank you Gf. Be blessed todsy.
Lovely poem Rodriguez. At my young age I had that attraction for blue eyes. All my friends knew that and one of them introduced me to a young guy that had beautiful blue eyes. When he looked at me I fall in love with him and I believe he did love me too because he came to be my romance for 3 years. I was too young and left to a far away city leaving my blue eyes behind. Broke my heart. Thanks for your writing.
This is a beautiful reply. You have several poems in this reply. Thank you for your comment. I too had an attraction for young blue eyes girl I married and have been with her just about36 years.
Oh! Great. Dark eyed people likes light colored eyes. Now I prefer to see the color of the heart. The color is not important for me anymore.
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