New Times.

Goldfinch60

The slither of the moon in the sky

Showing its rebirth,

The renewing of the time,

That time that always returns.

That time which gives us the chance

Gives us the chance to start again,

To start again in peaceful harmony,

Giving a sign of new times ahead.

 

Sometime in the future

My dream of peace will come true,

And the slither of moon

Will herald a new dawning,

Dawning into peaceful harmony.

 

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 20th, 2017 01:30
  • Comment from author about the poem: I just looked up into the sky early one morning and saw this moon and then wrote these words. The photograph is mine, taken of what I saw
  • Category: Reflection
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  • Sunflowers Bloom

    Niiice. I really like it

  • Goldfinch60

    Thank you Shine, much appreciated.

  • orchidee

    A fine write G/F. Wanting the moon to go to a full moon (from crescent to whole), not a new moon (vice versa). Though we could then write about 'new' times of the new moon. Doh! Sometimes I take analogies too far, and end up in a tangle!

    • Goldfinch60

      Keep taking the sherry Orchi.

    • Michael Edwards

      Beautiful poem - I live for the tomorrow and no looking back - great words.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Michael, tomorrow will be wonderful as is each new moment.

      • burning-embers

        Amen, i echo your plea in my recent piece. Once again excellent writing Goldfinch.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you b-e much appreciated.

        • Accidental Poet

          Awesome pic/poem combo. I too hope we all get to see your dream come true.

        • rrodriguez

          Gf, your dream of peace will transpire in a future realm. Right now let us work together to keep the sliver of peace we enjoy, alas, the world is in a cacophony of divergent calls for hate, fights, wars, etc. But, I like you, am a peacemaker. Moreover, I like your treatment of time. Time doesn't wait for us. Carpe diem; you never know what tomorrow will bring, but for today sow what you want tomorrow. Thanks for sharing...

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you for your comment rr, that dream of peace will always be there. Tomorrow is always going to be a better day.

            • rrodriguez

              You bet!

            • malubotelho

              This is truly having that poetic feeling and uncontrollable poetic thoughts that takes us from one minute to other to places and sights to make us write. Just awesome.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you so much m, most kind.

              • WL Schuett

                Cool poem ,very optimistic ...we all look for that peace

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you wl, that peace will come.

                • myself and me

                  Ha, finally I got the reason that I could not write a beautiful piece like this, because I look the Moon at wrong time, not morning but night.

                  Beautiful and thoughtful.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    The moon can bring on many beautiful thoughts both morning and night. Thank you mandm.

                  • FredPeyer

                    So beautiful, Goldfinch. Kudos!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you very much Fred, your comment is much appreciated.



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