'I am rich,' said the boy with a coin in his pocket
'I am richer,' said the girl with a tenner in her locket,
'I am the richest,' said the man loudly
Waving the winning lottery ticket - proudly!
'I am happy,' said the boy with a friend hand in hand
'I am happier,' said the girl with a friend and a dog on the ground
'I am the happiest,' said the man, quietly
Waving the winning lottery ticket - slightly!
'I am content,' said the boy with family in tow
'I am more content,' said the girl with family and friends to show
'I am the most content,' said the man, whispering
'Surrounded by money - I can buy anything!'
'I am lonely,' said the boy without someone to play
'I am lonelier,' said the girl without someone all day
'I am the loneliest,' said the man who began to cry
Knowing love - his lottery ticket can't buy!
The moral of this tale is it's all relative
You get back what your prepared to give
Money is only a crutch
And can't replace the human touch!
- Author: sue.evans ( Offline)
- Published: August 22nd, 2017 12:49
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 17
Comments6
Well like I say it's all relativeπ
Good luck and enjoy π
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Thank you π
Beautiful writing, nice rhyming, with a great message.
And while money certainly cannot buy happiness, it is nice to have enough. And that "enough" is all relative!
Thank you for reading and commenting so positively. I totally agree with what you say. π
Well written - great message.
Thank you π
Good write, money does not bring happiness, the love of our friends and family is the greatest give we have.
Thank you - I agree with what you say. π
Nicely written and so easily read. You could teach your wisdom to youngsters with this kind of writing. Wise and acccessible
A lovely compliment- thank you π
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