The silliest

malubotelho

The ~~~~ waiving ~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~wind ~~~~~~ from north ~~~~to west ~~~~~~blowing my mind~~~~~to configure ~~~~~~ a
test~~~~~ to superimpose ~~~~~
the silliest thing~~~~~ that is~~~~
trying ~~~~~ to play~~~~~to create
~~~~~~~~~~The best~~~~~~~~~~~

  • Author: Malu (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 23rd, 2017 13:27
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • WriteBeLight

    Very creative!

    • malubotelho

      Thanks for your visit.

    • orchidee

      A good windy write M.

    • Michael Edwards

      Good on yer for tryin' out different forms and ideas - great fun piece.

      • malubotelho

        Thanks Michael. When I have no inspiration I access creativity

      • WL Schuett

        Fun very clever ... good poem

        • malubotelho

          Thanks WL. I appreciate your comments.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Love the chase of words round the paper blowing away in your creative style. Great idea Malu.

          • malubotelho

            Thank you so much Fay. I was kind of blocked today for writing. It is happening lately. I have many writings started, none finished. This is why I said silly. Because it was a silly thing for me. I'm glad you liked it.

          • dusk arising

            I was tossed around like an old newspaper caught in the wind of your poem. How original

            • malubotelho

              Wow! Thank you. Your comments means a lot to me.

            • Egyptianqt79

              Awesome!!!

            • FredPeyer

              Thank you for putting the text below the picture as well. Tried to read it on my cell phone while riding the bus. Next to impossible!
              Very creative! You just gave me an idea I MUST try out. If it works I will put it on on some future date.

              • malubotelho

                Oh! Good. Yes, trying is always good. Innovation versus inspiration. My boyfriend is saying that now I'm rhyming all the time with what I say. Haha

              • Goldfinch60

                Clever write.



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