Ring In The Sand

myself and me

 

 

Found this ring

Half buried in the sand

Against the Sun

The gold still shine

Looped a forever promise

in a circle of

No beginning no end

 

Who lost this ring

Left it buried in the sand

Washed away by the tide

A love story forever end

Release the eternal commitment

In the cold wind

 

 

PS: Reading Hood's "Ring" from yesterday, haunted by the piercing feeling. Wrote this one to let it out.

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: myself and me (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 24th, 2017 09:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: Reading Hood's "Ring" from yesterday, it stuck in my mind. Wrote this one to get it out.
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments9

  • WL Schuett

    Beautifully expressed to Wonder what became of the love that gave the ring to begin with

  • WriteBeLight

    Very poignant!

  • Christina8

    Beautiful poem! You captured a story well here. Enjoyed reading!

    • myself and me

      Thank you for reading and your kind comments.

    • Michael Edwards

      well penned m&m

    • malubotelho

      Yes, Santita is right. What an incredible write. I enjoyed reading very much.

      • myself and me

        I am flatter. I am glad you enjoying it.

      • docstorm

        Lovely read, thanks for sharing.

        • myself and me

          Thank you. All the pleasure is mine.

        • FredPeyer

          If found objects could only talk!
          I love your poem, M&M.

          • myself and me

            I am so pleased that you love it. Thanks.

          • Thoff1

            Excellent

          • Goldfinch60

            Very good write.



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