Found this ring
Half buried in the sand
Against the Sun
The gold still shine
Looped a forever promise
in a circle of
No beginning no end
Who lost this ring
Left it buried in the sand
Washed away by the tide
A love story forever end
Release the eternal commitment
In the cold wind
PS: Reading Hood's "Ring" from yesterday, haunted by the piercing feeling. Wrote this one to let it out.
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Author:
myself and me (
Offline) - Published: August 24th, 2017 09:40
- Comment from author about the poem: Reading Hood's "Ring" from yesterday, it stuck in my mind. Wrote this one to get it out.
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Comments9
Beautifully expressed to Wonder what became of the love that gave the ring to begin with
Thank you. W.
Very poignant!
Thanks.
Beautiful poem! You captured a story well here. Enjoyed reading!
Thank you for reading and your kind comments.
well penned m&m
Thank you. M.E.
Yes, Santita is right. What an incredible write. I enjoyed reading very much.
I am flatter. I am glad you enjoying it.
Lovely read, thanks for sharing.
Thank you. All the pleasure is mine.
If found objects could only talk!
I love your poem, M&M.
I am so pleased that you love it. Thanks.
Excellent
Thanks.
Very good write.
Thanks. G
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