forever

dusk arising

 

 

the tide had retreated even further that morning
strolling along the waterline hand in hand
tiny footprints alongside his deep furrows
enjoying new freedom they were finally relaxed
all worry of being caught together now lost in the offshore breeze
she was a gazelle, a thing of such grace
his most beautiful little skinhead lover
her voice excited him yet more then
smiling china blue adoring eyes fired him to please her
stolen moments forever imprinted in his soul

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 24th, 2017 10:54
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  • Michael Edwards

    A beautiful scene that I can see in my minds eye - great write.

    • dusk arising

      It was beautiful, she was beautiful.

    • Christina8

      Beautiful and well written poem! I too love the last line. It really brought it together. Awesome!

      • dusk arising

        Thank you, youre very kind. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

      • malubotelho

        So awesome romantic. Just love it.

        • dusk arising

          Youre very kind, thank you.

        • myself and me

          Beautiful view, romantic writing.

          • dusk arising

            Thank you M and M youre very kind.

          • ron parrish aka wordman

            a beautiful poem of love,sounded like it was a secret love

            • dusk arising

              Yes my friend, in our own town we were very noticeable well known people in the public eye.

            • MaddieJ

              SO beautiful like everyone said.... I;m sorry she is now a "was."

              • dusk arising

                oooh long time gone but just as the piece says, i'll never forget

              • Poetic Dan

                Soulful writing

              • Goldfinch60

                Beautiful romantic write.

              • Neville

                absolutely delightful.. if you aint had one or two moments like this, then take it from me.. you just aint lived

                perfectly personal but loaned out here for us all to enjoy..... Neville

                • dusk arising

                  I wrote this knowing that every re-reading would take me back to that time and how it felt. I never want to lose the ability to recapture then and the many others i have written for similar reasons.
                  Thanks for your kind comments my friend.

                  • Neville

                    I thoroughly enjoyed it and agree entirely.. tis one of the reasons I tend to scribble away.... Neville



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