PAST DREAMS
His streams of venture
ceded to the stormy seas
Sunk in voids of time.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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Very good Senryu Michael,.
Love the picture.
Yes thanks for the correction - a senryu it is - I am always forgetting to make the distinction - thanks for commenting Andy
Very well written Senryu! Enjoyed it!
Thanks so much Christina
The poem is incredible, can be applied to so many occasions in life.
Michael, you are the prince of shorties! (King would have been too much!)
Thanks so much Fred - if my whimsicals are anything to go by I could be called the Court Jester.
Heck no, Michael, you are way above the Court Jester! You are good enough to live in Buckingham Palace, but, whether or not you are good enough to be the king, that I have to ponder about.
Could I be in charge of the Art Collection?
The art collection would consists of only YOUR paintings!
Good write and pic M. Did you wake from a dream 4 minutes late into the day?! lol.
Suffering from twitchy finger syndrome - went to paste it and realised I hadn't copied it in the first place - mind you it could be dementia if I could remember what that is !!
Well done
Cheers w
Short and sweet! loved it
Thanks muchly Shannon
Sad somehow but very beautiful and smart. Sunken dreams is me. Faded totally on dreams.
My trouble is I can rarely remember them - thanks malu
What a coincidence. "Short" for Friday.
Far beyond perfect.
Thanks - a good day today .T here are several posting shorties at the moment - and all of them so so good - would be great if we could put them all together in a single publication but: well I'll publish my short response to that idea tomorrow.
And a big thanks for saving this one in your favs,
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Good idea. Friday's Shorts
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