PAST DREAMS

Michael Edwards

 

 

PAST DREAMS

 

His streams of venture

ceded to the stormy seas

Sunk in voids of time.

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 25th, 2017 00:04
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments8

  • Goldfinch60

    Very good Senryu Michael,.

    Love the picture.

    • Michael Edwards

      Yes thanks for the correction - a senryu it is - I am always forgetting to make the distinction - thanks for commenting Andy

    • Christina8

      Very well written Senryu! Enjoyed it!

    • FredPeyer

      The poem is incredible, can be applied to so many occasions in life.
      Michael, you are the prince of shorties! (King would have been too much!)

      • Michael Edwards

        Thanks so much Fred - if my whimsicals are anything to go by I could be called the Court Jester.

        • FredPeyer

          Heck no, Michael, you are way above the Court Jester! You are good enough to live in Buckingham Palace, but, whether or not you are good enough to be the king, that I have to ponder about.

          • 2 more comments

        • orchidee

          Good write and pic M. Did you wake from a dream 4 minutes late into the day?! lol.

          • Michael Edwards

            Suffering from twitchy finger syndrome - went to paste it and realised I hadn't copied it in the first place - mind you it could be dementia if I could remember what that is !!

          • WL Schuett

            Well done

          • ShannonXx

            Short and sweet! loved it

          • malubotelho

            Sad somehow but very beautiful and smart. Sunken dreams is me. Faded totally on dreams.

            • Michael Edwards

              My trouble is I can rarely remember them - thanks malu

            • myself and me

              What a coincidence. "Short" for Friday.
              Far beyond perfect.

              • Michael Edwards

                Thanks - a good day today .T here are several posting shorties at the moment - and all of them so so good - would be great if we could put them all together in a single publication but: well I'll publish my short response to that idea tomorrow.

                And a big thanks for saving this one in your favs,

                .

                • myself and me

                  Good idea. Friday's Shorts



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