Love unconditional, perfect in every way
The sweet smell of honey,that sweet smell
Each day.
She touches, I melt, sweet love I've never felt.
So pure so real, anything broken she heals
Just the touch of her lips,
Takes my breath away, makes me
Weak in my knees, her love never strays.
She loves heavy, loves hard
On my heart she's left her mark
The best thing in my life, she's my light in the dark.
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Author:
Vincent & Jodi (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 25th, 2017 01:22
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem was written from my heart for my one true love in life Jodi frost I broke her heart and she left me she said she wasn\\\'t in love with me anymore and it hurt me to the core of my soul I have always loved to write poetry but never took it seriously until the break up her love that I lost inspired me to write how I feel about her because as a man I never expressed to her how much I really loved her so now I\\\'m doing it through my words I love u Jodi
- Category: Love
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I have alot of poems I wrote from my heart for my one and only love of my life Jodi denae frost
Good loving write, may that light shine forever. Welcome to MPS.
Is this an official site this isn't a scam site is it please be honest
Certainly not a scam site - in fact a site where poets of all abilities can post their work and where 'friendships' with likeminded poets can flourish. This is a great piece of work and do please post more.
Hi Vincent, Michael is right, it is not a scam site, just have a look at the vast body of work on here by the poets.
Do poets on here usually get recognized for their writings
Welcome to MPS, Vincent!
I like the way you write, honest and from the heart.
And as far as the site is concerned, we are all writers, we read each others work, comment if we feel like it, and that is about it.
If somebody comments on one of your poems, it is common courtesy to say thank you and to read that other person's poetry as well and to comment on it.
That's about it. Would love to read more from you!
Thank u for commenting on my work
Vincent jodi you are an excellent poet.
Thank u so much for liking my work
All we ask here is that you look at our offerings in return and leave a comment. You will find todays poems listed under the 'community' heading at top of here.
First of all, welcome to MPS! I loved your poem, it was very heartfelt. So sorry your heart is broken. But we try to encourage each other on this site. I hope you continue to write more. Thanks for sharing!
Thank u I just published another one called story untold
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