malubotelho

Enamored

              Come with me, he said                       All I want is to capture one more of your smiles, keep it as a prize for when the night drinks the last breath of the day, we shall have no more chance.
Let us live today as today, so we can die in the arms of Eros with no regrets.
I want to see you following the path of my heart. Retrace our destinies into togetherness.
I need to build my faith with the transparency of your kind smile.
You are the beauty, drawn by Gods hand to fulfill my time.
Come closer into my arms.
Your perfumed hair becomes sweeter when entangled with mine.
When the moon comes, brushing strokes of silvered and blue light, we will embrace every spark and sing our love song till our breathing has conquered the night.                               As the day in turn will shine its bright
we together have created a world, just for the two of us

                 

Comments11

  • ShannonXx

    Really loved this! a very vivid read

    • malubotelho

      Thanks sweet girl.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Such a romantic write and the picture adds to the feel of togetherness - a gem of a read Malu.

      • malubotelho

        Thank you Fay. I'm humble for your comments. Really appreciated.

      • Michael Edwards

        Great words superbly assembled - and a great read.

        • malubotelho

          Wow Michael! Thank you. You are the master so I'm very happy for your comments.

        • Candlewitch

          dear malu,

          lovely and delicious down to the very last word!

          *hugs, Cat

          • malubotelho

            Thanks Cat. So you are being romantic now.

          • Louis Gibbs

            Phew! Who needs porn with poetry like this? So well done, Malu.

            • malubotelho

              Thanks Louis. Romance is more involving then porn. At least for me. Romance lasts forever but sex not as much. At some point one gets tired.

            • WriteBeLight

              Such a beautiful invitation! Well done.

              • malubotelho

                Thank you so much. I really appreciate you coming here.

              • myself and me

                "we together have created a world"
                A world fill with love, powerful love.

                I shall create myself such a world.
                Wonderful piece.

                • malubotelho

                  Thanks mm. If you are a romantic person this is the world for you.

                • FredPeyer

                  Romance of the first degree!
                  You are giving Harlequin a run for their money here.
                  Nice!

                  • malubotelho

                    Thanks Fred. I'm not sure if is still a place for romantic people in this world. I have that romantic person inside me and I live it. Thanks for reading it.

                  • WL Schuett

                    Very romantic and visual... nicely done this would be a nice spoken word piece

                    • malubotelho

                      Thanks W. Yes. If someone could play it. I'm not sure I could do. I might try inside my room but this one is for a man to do. I have a very delicate voice. Would not sound right.

                    • dusk arising

                      "Beauty, drawn by gods hand to fulfill my time"....... beautiful line fills me with nostalgia of younger days. "till our breathing has conquered the night".... you are a cauldron of passionate phrase and nuance malubotelho. Lovely writing.

                      • malubotelho

                        I'm laughing here. Yes. Where do I get this? I'm romantic but I have to confess that this is overdone, even for me. I appreciate your comments. Thank you.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Very good loving write.



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