rrodriguez

Beautiful Thinking (An acrostic poem)

                                           

                                                     Every time I think of you

                                                     Under the celestial orb

                                                     Nothing can compare the blue

                                                     Of your eyes in full force

                                                     In the vastness of the sky

                                                    And the Caribbean Sea

Comments5

  • Invisible Scars

    This is very beautifully written

    • rrodriguez

      Thank you for visiting me in this site and giving me your gracious comment. Thank you!

    • Michael Edwards

      Well written and I have to admit I can't recall coming across the word before.

    • Goldfinch60

      This is a wonderful write.

    • malubotelho

      I like the word and the meaning and could be a girls name too. Nice poem and I like the form too. Very interesting.

      • rrodriguez

        Thank you Mayorship for your comment. I didn't realize it could be a girl's name. Certainly it would be a beautiful one.

      • Shahla Latifi

        A good analogy poem.

        • rrodriguez

          Thank you Shahla for your kind words.



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