FredPeyer

Marriage

Still sound in the night

Two trees bathed in light

Two drops of warm rain

United, everything to gain

Hope and fear divided by two

The world suddenly a different hue

Swans drifting on a quiet lake

One asleep the other awake

Math changed, differently done

One plus one now equals one

Listening to the birds outside

Nothing more to hide

Dog barking it’s getting late

He is only looking for his mate

Life in turmoil totally invert

Wearing the I love you shirt

Hot bodies excitedly entwined

Sparks shooting through the mind

No more alone, finally there

With awe I look at the ring I wear

Comments9

  • FredPeyer

    Thanks so much Santita, you are very kind!

  • Christina8

    This poem is wonderful! I've been married a long time and I love the last few lines of your poem! So many great things about this write!

    • FredPeyer

      Thank you so much Christina, and congratulations!

    • myself and me

      "Two drops of warm rain
      United, everything to gain"
      "Swans drifting on a quiet lake
      One asleep the other awake"
      So beautiful, so peaceful and so sweet. A happy marriage is such a blessing.

      • FredPeyer

        Yes it is, and thank you very much for your kind comment.

      • malubotelho

        This is beautiful Fred. Congrats on your marriage and the poem. Your wife must be happy with all your writings for her.

        • FredPeyer

          I hope so when one day I will show them to her! ;-) Thank you for your kind comment!

        • Louis Gibbs

          Having tasted the bliss of a happy marriage, I can certainly relate to this tribute to it. Well written, Fred!

          • FredPeyer

            Thanks so much, Louis!

          • Michael Edwards

            So well expressed Fed - like Christina I can relate to this.

            • FredPeyer

              Mahalo Michael, I think we are the lucky ones!

              • Michael Edwards

                We are indeed.

              • Egyptianqt79

                Wow! Ur just amazing!

                • FredPeyer

                  Thanks so much, but it is my wife who is amazing. I just write it down, she does it!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Superb loving write.

                  • FredPeyer

                    Thanks so much, Goldfinch!

                  • dusk arising

                    Amazing piece of writing which im sure resonates with all who are a part of or have been a part of the union of marriage. Certainly reminds me of what i am missing.

                    • FredPeyer

                      Thanks d a, what you are missing are the good parts, what you are not missing are the bad parts. Let's be realistic here, while I stand behind everything I write, there are things that do not get into print. No relationship is complete without some storms once in a while.

                      • dusk arising

                        Given a choice of mixed weather or no weather.. hmmmm i think i'd prefer the mixed.



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