MY
FRIEND IS
A WITCH CALLED
GRUMBLEBITCH ~ SHE
HAS A BLACK C A T ~ AND
A BLACK POINTED H A T ~ SHE
RIDES ON HER BROOM YES AS SOON
AS IT'S GLOOM ~ SHE CAN CAST A SPELL
AND SEND YOU TO HELL ! TAKE CARE BEWARE
SHE CAN MAKE GROWN MEN TWITCH ~ BAD GRUMBLEBITCH
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX
This POEM is presented as an ETHEREE ~ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
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BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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It's started me swooning - twitch?! heehee. A fine write B.
Thanks STEVE ~ Pleased she made you twitch ~ I've had lots of SPOOKY GF's in my time ! Boooooooo BRIAN
HI STEVE ~ SANTITA & I would be pleased if you would comment on our completed PASTIMES FUSION ~ Thanks BRIAN
Wouldn't mind to be bewitched by a witch looking like the one in your drawing! (Just kidding, got my own bewitching witch right here at home!)
Thanks FRED ~ very droll ~ all Ladies bewitch and sometime bitch ~ but usually for a good reason ! BRIAN
HI FRED ~ SANTITA and I would be pleased if you commented on our completed PASTIMES FUSION ~ Thanks B.
And I bet she's got bad breath - great one - made me smile. Must write one of these when I get a moment.
YES MICHAEL ~ Depends if she has too much GARLIC in her cauldron to keep the vampires away ! Mine tastes of PEPPERMINT (Trebor Extra !) Slim ETHEREES do make a Volcano or a Witches Hat ~ reverse ETHEREES (like Santita's) make a cone ~ nice to lick ! Please comment on our completed FUSION ~ Thanks BRIAN
I think i know of a witch, who does good - a bit of a glitch!
She's certainly cast a spell, we're all under it - you can tell.
And lately, it seems, she's all over our screens.
I wonder have you noticed as well.
We all love her to bits!
nice writing..... picture reminded me of .....
Thanks DA ~ Thanks GOD all the "WITCHES" on MPS are White Ones who would send us to Heaven and not HELL~ My fave on MPS has to be the Lovely SANTITA and in the Media of course the ever living and ever loving PRINCESS DIANA ~ QUEEN of all our HEARTS. The picture reminded me of DIANA ~ very independent in her latter years ! The PASTIMES FUSION by SANTITA & I is now complete and posted ~ you might like to add a comment ? Yours BRIAN
Very sweet writing dear Brian. I love childish spirit. So light and fun. Very adorable. A sexy little witch. Does she dissolves chocolate and caramel on her caldron. If I was a witch I would do. Just lovely 😊
Thanks MALU ~ love your whole hearted endorsement encourages me to get off my Academic & Spiritual Musehorse ~ once in a while ~ and reveal my fun side. I thought the Witch was appropriate to the ODE and a bit Princess Diana ~ We're celebrating (not mourning) the 20th Anniversary of her LIFE. She was too much of a "Free Spirit" for the stiff & starchy UK Royalty. Thanks GOD for William & Kate & The Kids and Prince Harry ~ they too are Free Spirits ~ just like their MUM ! Chocolate & Caramel ~ Yummy ~ A Sweet Hug from Brother BRIAN
Thanks Brian. I did not know was about princess Diana, but I love her a lot. She was very special. I like to see Kate and the family now. Still not liking Charlie and Camilla. Your poem about a little witch inspired me to write a funny one for you in special. Just for fun.
The form of your poem turned out like the witch's hat.
Nice poem, scary witch.
Thanks M & M ~ I like a poem to have recognisable shape and not just an irregular amorphous mass ! Of course you can (with centering) form a Diamond ~ Hourglass ~ Circle ~ Triangle ~ Square etc ! Because each line in an ETHEREE increases by ONE SYLLABLE it automatically forms a PYRAMID or a CONE for an INVERTED ETHEREE ~ This enables us to write an ETHEREE about a Witches Hat or a Volcano or an Ice Cream or Olympic Torch etc ~ OK ! Pleased you found GRUMBLEBITCH scary I didn't want to scare the children on this site ! Yours BRIAN !
Very well done etheree! I enjoyed this new topic from you. Does she make you twitch? lol Great job!! Hugs-Christina
THANKS CHRIS ~ It naturally forms a narrow triangle because it is based on a SYLLABLE count and not a WORD count ~ try one. I'm writing one on POPOCATEPETL ~ My fave Volcano ! Pleased you liked the WITCH ~ MALU's Witch is much more Brazilian than mine (too slim) ~ she made me twitch ! HUGS for You too ~ BRIAN
read and enjoyed 🙂
Thanks WILLIS ~ Always a great topic ~ plaed you enjoyed Her ! BRIAN
Fun poem, and very clever to make it look like a witch's hat! She doesn't look very scary, though! 😉
Thanks VIV ~ you are very perceptive ! I wanted to illustrate a Real Witch ~ Pointy Hat ~ Black cat ~ Broomstick an' all ~ BUT ~ there are Young Teens on this site (and OLD MEN !) and I didn't want to scare them OK ! I find BLONDE WITCHES are generally WHITE WITCHES ~ OK. We are pioneering "Poems with Attitude & Shape" ! My contribution today is an EDONE in which 10 words increasing by ONE LETTER as they descend VERTICALLY ~ A Poor Man's ETHEREE. The result is a very thin PYRAMID so my Title is EL GRECO. MPS is an OPEN UNIVERSITY of POETRY ~ SO we all learn from each other ! Today SANTITA ha shared a SEDOKA ~ Please visit ~ Yours BRIAN
Very nicely done, Brian. Bravo.
THANKS FRANK ~ Pleased you liked it ! Of course an ETHEREE must turn out conical visually ~ so linguistically one can take advantage of that ! SHAPE (form) Poetry is always fun ~ BRIAN
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