Another year has passed in your life,
Another year of experience and love.
But this year it is special,
As the number sixty is reached.
But sixty is just a number,
Your life will go on the same,
The time you spend with loved ones
Will still be there.
It will not change,
Age is inevitable,
But it is not a hindrance,
It is a spur to move forward.
Move forward in your life,
In the knowledge
That life will always be there,
And will go on,
Go on to infinity.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 30th, 2017 01:38
- Comment from author about the poem: It was our friend Hilary's 60th Birthday last week and I wrote this for her.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments6
A fine write G/F. Did us two start from infinity, or when? We was both around in 1066 anyway!
Thanks Orchi.
Goldfinch, your friend Hilary is a very lucky woman to have this exellent poem written for her!
Thank you Fred, for some reason she likes my poetry.
Your friend is very lucky , you have written her a very wonderful piece
Thank you for your kind words WL.
What a lovely gesture and what a fine poem to offer her.
Thank you Michael.
A beautiful birthday poem. Full of love and blessing.
"In the knowledge
That life will always be there,
And will go on,"
Thank you m and m, much appreciated.
The gift of poetry created by a friend is something special. You are giving a personal tribute, its a part of your relationship with that person. This is quite a lovely gift. I hope she was appreciative of your creativity.
Thank you d a, she has always liked my poetry, she had rather a bad accident winter before last and was bedridden for many months and I started giving her some of my poetry and she reckons that it helped her deal with her situation.
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