Night
Stretches
The longing into endless ...
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Author:
myself and me (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Another line.
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Comments9
Nice I wish I could say what I have to say in one line , well done
You did. Your comment is in one line. 🙂
nice short and meaningful. nothing wasted. Good concise write.
Thank you for your kind words.
Beautiful choice of words with so much meaning. I can just picture somebody lying in bed alone with the longing becoming unbearable....
Your digestion make it more beautiful. Thanks.
I like it. *Thumbs up*!
Thank you Shine. Your kind words shine my day up.
Indeed yes. Good work, M.
Thanks. FP.
I like that. I would stretch the night to sleep more or to meditate on bed, or to just relax because I don't long for anything. So funny this came to me. No longing. Go to bed MM
Perfect, that is something we all shall do, without longing, stretch night to sleep.
Yes.
I just love one-liners and love this
Thanks. M.E. I am glad you love it.
Another good one m and m.
Thanks. G.
Short and concise, yet filled with so much meaning. Beautiful, and sad. Nice write!
Thank you for reading and kind words.
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