Stretch

myself and me

Night

Stretches

The longing into endless ...

  • Author: myself and me (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 2nd, 2017 15:06
  • Comment from author about the poem: Another line.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 34
  • User favorite of this poem: malubotelho.
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Comments9

  • WL Schuett

    Nice I wish I could say what I have to say in one line , well done

    • myself and me

      You did. Your comment is in one line. 🙂

    • dusk arising

      nice short and meaningful. nothing wasted. Good concise write.

      • myself and me

        Thank you for your kind words.

      • FredPeyer

        Beautiful choice of words with so much meaning. I can just picture somebody lying in bed alone with the longing becoming unbearable....

        • myself and me

          Your digestion make it more beautiful. Thanks.

        • J.M. Shine

          I like it. *Thumbs up*!

          • myself and me

            Thank you Shine. Your kind words shine my day up.

          • Frank Prem

            Indeed yes. Good work, M.

          • malubotelho

            I like that. I would stretch the night to sleep more or to meditate on bed, or to just relax because I don't long for anything. So funny this came to me. No longing. Go to bed MM

            • myself and me

              Perfect, that is something we all shall do, without longing, stretch night to sleep.

              • malubotelho

                Yes.

              • Michael Edwards

                I just love one-liners and love this

                • myself and me

                  Thanks. M.E. I am glad you love it.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Another good one m and m.

                • Viv Wade

                  Short and concise, yet filled with so much meaning. Beautiful, and sad. Nice write!

                  • myself and me

                    Thank you for reading and kind words.



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