Invisible and unmeasurable
Part of me, yet separate
Intimate, yet unfathomable
Gentle guide, always present
Other dimensional, ethereal
Creator of thought & imagination
Imperceptible reality intertwined
With perceived verisimilitude
Pure consciousness
Free from physical manifestation
Indiscernible source of power
Unbound to logic or science
Conveyance of the brightest of lights
Embracing intelligence and love
Seeker of wisdom, courage & strength
Harmonizing with Universal Power
Eternal interface of
Past, present, and future
Vigilant guardian of
The quintessence of ME.
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Author:
Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 3rd, 2017 02:30
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And wonderful it sounds, too, Fred.
There is nothing so profound as 'you' and you ability to know it.
A pleasure and a celebration. Thanks Fred.
Thanks so much Frank!
Very true Fred. Within us lies our life and that life will go on to eternity.
Thanks for reading, Goldfinch, and yes you are right, we will exist into eternity.
So inspiring your definition of the soul Fred - - a mountain of reasons to read its depth over again = a favourite for me and thanks for sharing.
To become a favorite of yours, Fay, is an honor. Thank you!
Looking within is always a learning experience to marvel at. Excellent writing Fred. ; )
Thanks so much A P!
Gorgeous words woven together to make the most beautiful patchwork. Dreamy
And a patchwork it is, BlueDays, thank you for commenting!
I learned a new word which no doubt i will promptly forget 'verisimilitude'. In fact your piece, had it not mentioned verisimilitude could be said to contain verisimilitude. I know exactly what you mean. At least in all probability i do. Good writing.
You are absolutely right, d a! Verisimilitude = the appearance of being true or real. The whole poem does have that, but we won't know for sure!
These verses shine, friend. One of your finest. You took a subject that I think can lean towards cliche and gave it a new voice. Wonderful!
Thanks so much Heather. You are so right. There is a lot of 'cliche' about this subject. Thank you for your kind comment!
Ooh a very 'psychological' poem Fred. Great descriptions, as we can't physically see our thoughts, emotions, etc. Well, maybe some, such as sorrow expressed in tears, etc.
Ahh, veri-wotsit, long word there! *Looks up dictionary*! Lots of long words in fact!
Thanks Orchidee! We don't see the emotions, we only see the results! And you know, all you guys write with these 'long words', so I figured I can do that too! 😉
They is fine long words you has - not 'alf! A somewhat ungrammatically correct sentence there!
Great bit of poetry so well put together, a super work Fred
Thank you so much, Michael!
An interesting word, verisimilitude, used herein from the perspective of conscious mind perceiving the soul. Perhaps the soul perceives the body-mind the same way, you think? Another splendid, thought-provoking poem from your pen, Fred!
Thank you Louis. No I don't think that the soul perceives the body/mind the same way. The soul is all-knowing whereas we hardly know anything!
Point well taken. Thanks.
A poem from a true philosopher. The depth, the dimension, and the function of soul described so accurately in your writing.
M&M, I am certainly no philosopher! But I do think. I may be right, or I may be wrong, my poem simply describes how I feel about what the soul is. Thank you so much for your comment!
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