Jordy L G

The Girl In My Dreams

When nothing in this world seems peaceful, I lay my head on this pillow, thoughts whirl, they deepen.

I see a shadow of a girl, holy smile, so sweet full. 

Not a single bad bone, positive kind, so real.

Has her own problems, so selfless and gives all.

As I drift closer I can't help but notice, her heart broken, 

emotions closed behind doors, they are locked with no token.

She holds scars like everybody else.

But remains strong, not like anybody else.

Her beautiful brown eyes light up, like that of stars in the night sky.

How can I not but smile? She's like a breathe of new life.

I reach and run my fingers through her long brown hair.

Speechless, she's an angel, from a world afar, not here.

The warmth of her soul, a candle in the night.

I wish I had forever, but I only have tonight.

A flush of purity falls over me, dreams are born to end.

It felt like I had eternity, maybe one day we are meant.

So to the girl in my dreams,

I hope we meet again. 





    WELCOME JORDY ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem ! In keeping with the topic (DREAM GIRL) it has great flow (metre) augmented by ample rhyme ! It is a PROPER POEM ~ easy both to read and recite ! There is a single theme so it is well accommodated in a single verse ! Most of us can empathise because we have ALL dreamed of our perfect DREAM PARTNER & SOUL MATE ! My current GF (Angela) is also my Dream Girl ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B.

    • Jordy L G

      Thank you, Brian!

    • bwilliams

      I love this poem.

      • Jordy L G

        Thank you!

      • lanaevans

        This is so beautiful.

        • Jordy L G

          Thank you!

        • alissa

          This is lovely, so bittersweet.

          • Jordy L G

            Thank you!

          • myself and me

            There was a saying " If you can dream it, you will have it".
            "So to the girl in my dreams,
            I hope we meet again. "
            Your dream will come true one day.
            Nice poem. Welcome to this site.

            • Jordy L G

              Thank you!

            • MaddieJ

              I often dream about the perfect man for me. Then I realize that no man is perfect. He is only in my dreams. I know how it feels to want to see that person in your dreams again. Great write! Welcome to MPS!

              • Jordy L G

                Thank you!

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