An
end
that
ought
praise
peoples
lifelong
existence
generating
celebration
~
I
am
one
poet
among
truant
fortune
battling
prejudice
stupendous
~
To
see
such
close
beauty
devours
careless
devotions
whispering
temptations
- Author: BlueDays ( Offline)
- Published: September 6th, 2017 01:37
- Comment from author about the poem: Thank you to Myself and Me and Michael Edwards for creating, through their own poems, the encouragement to write my own Edone's. It was a thoroughly enjoyable challenge and I am quite proud of the results. Thanks everyone on MPS for inspiring my imagination, I am alight with creativity and I am learning so much!
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 31
Comments7
Three good writes BD, well done.
Thank you Goldfinch
Clever.
Thanks dusk, was fun.
A good endeavor I think you succeeded wonderfully well cool poems
😃 thanks WL!
I feel really honoured that you've taken the challenge and what a result - wow. I have submitted the form for formal recognition on another site - still waiting to hear so fingers crossed.
Thanks Michael, I love it! I hope it gets the recognition it deserves.
Very well done, BlueDays!
Thanks Fred
This creation has nothing to do with me. It is solo Michael's idea, I simply try to finish a homework.
You did them so well.
Yes I didn't realise until Michael said about getting formal recognition! Very clever. Your poem still encouraged me though so thanks go to you as well.
This was so fun to read,I enjoyed this,thankyou!
Aww you're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed them, thanks for your lovely feedback 😊
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