A Trilogy of Edone Poems

BlueDays

An

end

that

ought

praise

peoples

lifelong

existence

generating

celebration

 

~

 

I

am

one

poet

among

truant

fortune

battling

prejudice

stupendous

 

~

 

To

see

such

close

beauty

devours

careless

devotions

whispering

temptations 

 

  • Author: BlueDays (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 6th, 2017 01:37
  • Comment from author about the poem: Thank you to Myself and Me and Michael Edwards for creating, through their own poems, the encouragement to write my own Edone's. It was a thoroughly enjoyable challenge and I am quite proud of the results. Thanks everyone on MPS for inspiring my imagination, I am alight with creativity and I am learning so much!
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Comments7

  • Goldfinch60

    Three good writes BD, well done.

    • BlueDays

      Thank you Goldfinch

    • dusk arising

      Clever.

      • BlueDays

        Thanks dusk, was fun.

      • WL Schuett

        A good endeavor I think you succeeded wonderfully well cool poems

        • BlueDays

          😃 thanks WL!

        • Michael Edwards

          I feel really honoured that you've taken the challenge and what a result - wow. I have submitted the form for formal recognition on another site - still waiting to hear so fingers crossed.

          • BlueDays

            Thanks Michael, I love it! I hope it gets the recognition it deserves.

          • FredPeyer

            Very well done, BlueDays!

            • BlueDays

              Thanks Fred

            • myself and me

              This creation has nothing to do with me. It is solo Michael's idea, I simply try to finish a homework.
              You did them so well.

              • BlueDays

                Yes I didn't realise until Michael said about getting formal recognition! Very clever. Your poem still encouraged me though so thanks go to you as well.

              • Samreen Chowdhury

                This was so fun to read,I enjoyed this,thankyou!

                • BlueDays

                  Aww you're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed them, thanks for your lovely feedback 😊



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