it was his way
anticipation
let her breathe a while
maturity would reward him
upon moistened lips
his tongue would savour
oh aromatic thrill
his fingers began to caress
curves of pleasure
yes
full bodied
and beautifully rounded
now!
no more teasing
he knew she was ready
he drank of her
lustfully
greedily
head swimming
with sheer delight
savouring her finesse
he'd waited and here at last
gratification
no immature cheap tart taint
of the barrell room here
but a fine rich burgandy wine
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Got me all going here, d a, but then that unexpected, yet great last line!
Whooooaaah there boy... have a glass of wine! Thank you Fred.
Oh so sensuous and I do love wine. Great poem dusk
Thank you ME.
Ah - Such an unexpected ending - what a sensuous tease you composed here -- -- great read.
Fay what were you expecting. I'm a perfect English gentleman. Well that's what my mum said i was supposed to be anyway. Thank you.
Very sensual stirs the loins. Hot. Nicely done
Steady now! Pull up a chair and rest a moment, would you care for a glass of wine?..... I'm afraid the ladies have finished off all the good stuff so just a glass of Pinotage or two. Thanks for commenting.
Can you tell me please, which way did they go once they finished off the good stuff I'll buy another bottle.
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hahaha, if your mum only knew. ; )
She was a wise old bird in her way. She'd have emptied the bottle long before i started appreciating its curves. Thanks for commenting.
Wonderfully crafted picture!
Thank you poetboy.
I didn't see that coming haha. Very good poem though.
Thanks for reading me and your kind comments ruby.e
Nothing is better than this "fine rich burgandy wine". So intoxicating.
thank you for reading and commenting m&m
I could see myself there and this made me reminisce of sensual times past
I was only having a glass of wine - honest! Thanks for commenting.
Good sensuous write, that is the way I feel about my rioja.
I know... bill hailey and the comets Rioja n'Roll.... what was their biggy ...oh yes Rioja around the clock - suit you sir!
A read to get the juices flowing.
A Casanova at work here.
Enjoyable read.
Now i would have thought with a name like yours and Grommit there to assist you, it would have been obvious there was cheese involved - hence a good red wine was necessary. Thanks for commenting.
Your sensuous words have made me blush,
They gave me a tremendous hot flush!
Sexiness turned up to full throttle...
Forget the glass - pass me the bottle! 🙂
I can see you'll compete something rotten,
since i rhymed a bit on your hairy bottom,
i hope we'll be pals if we must compete
i bet yer next poems about smelly feet
nice to have fun comments
This is so moving😂! Great write
Delicious DA.. I would almost certainly take 6 bottles and bin 69....you cleva geeza you.... Neville
Gone are the days of pulling a corker! Everythings now available with the convenience a quick screw cap. A full bodied, and luscious reward was always worth a bit of a tease.
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