lustfully, greedily

dusk arising


it was his way
let her breathe a while
maturity would reward him
upon moistened lips
his tongue would savour
oh aromatic thrill
his fingers began to caress
curves of pleasure
full bodied
and beautifully rounded
no more teasing
he knew she was ready
he drank of her
head swimming
with sheer delight
savouring her finesse
he'd waited and here at last
no immature cheap tart taint
of the barrell room here
but a fine rich burgandy wine

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 6th, 2017 15:01
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  • FredPeyer

    Got me all going here, d a, but then that unexpected, yet great last line!

    • dusk arising

      Whooooaaah there boy... have a glass of wine! Thank you Fred.

    • Michael Edwards

      Oh so sensuous and I do love wine. Great poem dusk

    • Fay Slimm.

      Ah - Such an unexpected ending - what a sensuous tease you composed here -- -- great read.

      • dusk arising

        Fay what were you expecting. I'm a perfect English gentleman. Well that's what my mum said i was supposed to be anyway. Thank you.

      • Mugsdaddy

        Very sensual stirs the loins. Hot. Nicely done

        • dusk arising

          Steady now! Pull up a chair and rest a moment, would you care for a glass of wine?..... I'm afraid the ladies have finished off all the good stuff so just a glass of Pinotage or two. Thanks for commenting.

          • Mugsdaddy

            Can you tell me please, which way did they go once they finished off the good stuff I'll buy another bottle.

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          • Accidental Poet

            hahaha, if your mum only knew. ; )

            • dusk arising

              She was a wise old bird in her way. She'd have emptied the bottle long before i started appreciating its curves. Thanks for commenting.

            • poetboy5454

              Wonderfully crafted picture!

            • ruby.e

              I didn't see that coming haha. Very good poem though.

              • dusk arising

                Thanks for reading me and your kind comments ruby.e

              • myself and me

                Nothing is better than this "fine rich burgandy wine". So intoxicating.

                • dusk arising

                  thank you for reading and commenting m&m

                • LM1005

                  I could see myself there and this made me reminisce of sensual times past

                  • dusk arising

                    I was only having a glass of wine - honest! Thanks for commenting.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Good sensuous write, that is the way I feel about my rioja.

                    • dusk arising

                      I know... bill hailey and the comets Rioja n'Roll.... what was their biggy ...oh yes Rioja around the clock - suit you sir!

                    • Wallace

                      A read to get the juices flowing.
                      A Casanova at work here.
                      Enjoyable read.

                      • dusk arising

                        Now i would have thought with a name like yours and Grommit there to assist you, it would have been obvious there was cheese involved - hence a good red wine was necessary. Thanks for commenting.

                      • Viv Wade

                        Your sensuous words have made me blush,
                        They gave me a tremendous hot flush!
                        Sexiness turned up to full throttle...
                        Forget the glass - pass me the bottle! 🙂

                        • dusk arising

                          I can see you'll compete something rotten,
                          since i rhymed a bit on your hairy bottom,
                          i hope we'll be pals if we must compete
                          i bet yer next poems about smelly feet

                          nice to have fun comments

                        • Samreen Chowdhury

                          This is so moving😂! Great write

                        • Neville

                          Delicious DA.. I would almost certainly take 6 bottles and bin cleva geeza you.... Neville

                          • dusk arising

                            Gone are the days of pulling a corker! Everythings now available with the convenience a quick screw cap. A full bodied, and luscious reward was always worth a bit of a tease.

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