His
Great smile
Stole my breath
Just one quick glance
My Heat skipped a beat
I could not help ~ but stare
I'm completely ~ mesmerized
Where had this MAN been all my life?
All it took was ~ THAT BEAUTIFUL SMILE
NOW ~ I believe in ~ LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT !
When I saw her it was LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT !
Dress clung sensuous ~ to her FIGURE
Her Face and Jewels told me GYPSY
Her hair shining lustrous black
Her hands and feet naked
She walked, ~ elegant
Dare not approach
There was nil
Chance of
LOVE
Thanks for visiting ~ Comments welcome ~ Love B & S ~ XOXOX
This poem is presented as a Tete-a-Beche Etheree (Girl on top !)
It is LOVE POEM and if structured properly it forms a DIAMOND
which is a symbol of Eternal Love ~ Diamonds are Forever !
An ETHEREE is syllabi constrained 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 and a
REVERSE ETHEREE 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 ~ SO NOW YOU KNOW !
The Topic was chosen by the Romantic SANTITA who wrote the
first stanza. Brian wrote the second verse (from experience !) The
glitch is that ~ in the UK ~ GYPSY GIRLS are encouraged to marry
within a close knit "Family of Travellers" A PIKEY like BRIAN would
not get past the CARAVAN DOOR ~ You can LOOK but not LEAP !
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ! VISION makes such an impact on one's MIND (and LIBIDO) that the first sight of a STRANGER can puih your LOVE BUTTON ~ Across a Crowded Room ~ Walking in the Park or on the Beach ~ At Work in Church or anywhere ! In SANTITA'S case it was the SMILE and (judging by the Photo) she was Swept off her Feet ! HOWEVER ~ if we do get a chance to have speech with the VISION ~ we can discover thy are Married or Engaged etc ~ OR that their Vision of You did not spark their LIBIDO. Poor BRIAN even though sensuously excited realised because he was a PIKEY (non-Gypsy) his pursuit of ESMERALDA would have been in vain ~ although in his MIND ~ She was already scooped up in his arms. What is your experience of LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ? Comments welcome SANTITA & BRIAN XOXOX
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Well done by both of you. ; )
Thanks AP ~ it is an elegant collaboration Poem ~ Pleased you liked it ! Yours SANTITA & BRIAN
A great collaboration! Hope you got your man, Santita, and just too bad for you Brian. Next time don't go for Gypsies!
Thanks FRED ! The Lovely Santita always gets her MAN ! I have visited GYPSY encampments with the CHURCH. Gypsy Girls are beautiful and very fruitful ~ but jealously chaperoned ~ BOO HOO ~ Yours SANTITA & BRIAN
I've experienced Lust at first sight ... Love took a little longer. Enjoyed the poem, Santita & Brian!
Thanks LOUIS ~ I guess most Men LUST a little every day ! However (in my experience) Ladies are more in control of their LIBIDO and LOVE a little every day ! Thanks S & B
Oohh good syllabi? Are they similar to octopi?! I wish I would shut up. heehee. A fine write B and S.
Well STEVE ~ I owe it all to a Classic Education and a Father who is a Wordsmith ! The finished Poem is the product of two kindred minds ~ We are pleased you liked it ~ Yours SANTITA & BRIAN.
That was cool , well done you teamed up nicely
Another excellent collaboration! Great poems done by both of you--excellent etherees! I still think I have experienced love at first sight. And I hope Santita and you as well Brian have too! Elegant wording in the poems. Hugs! Christina
Thanks for your encouragement CHRISTINA ~ In a FUSION or a COLLABORATION the end product is always greater than the Sum of the Parts. I know you have experienced Love at First Sight and you know I have ! You will have to ask SANTITA ! In ETHEREES and all shaped Poems INDIVIDUAL WORDS are important because they dictate the SHAPE. Do you have a POEM for us all today ? Double Hugs ~ BRIAN
Sorry maybe tomorrow or the next I will have a poem for you!
The team done well - two super poets and what an outcome - congratulations to you both.
What a priceless diamond with two pieces of love in it.
Love this diamond at first sight.
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