Kat and Santita all at sea

dusk arising

 

 


Dusk arises as we find our main character
dry mouthed, and low on oxygen
cresting a yellow coral reef at 32 fathoms.
Kat Cousteau the renown undersea Diva
adjusts her poetic flippers for the final swim.
Before her stretches a hollow brick road
to the sunken wreck town of San Tita-nic
now an encrusted relic having gone down once to often
inhabited by every urchin from an ISIS-olease triangle
Kat is on a mission to bring back the guilty ice cubes.
They are to be tried for the sinking
of the supposedly unsinkable San Tita-nic.
and to finally set to rest the story that
14 members of the San Tita-nic's band
went down on her that fatal night.
In the dull light the graceful curves
of San Tita-nic's stern are still an awesome sight
whilst below the whispy curls of anenome conceal
where once was a magnificent screw
light fades around our shark infested wreck
as our hero closes in
Will Kat Cousteau complete her mission
Shall we ever know San Tita-nics hidden secrets
dont miss next weeks cunning episode.

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 7th, 2017 18:30
  • Comment from author about the poem: a hurriedly thrown together revenge for the injustice done by this colluding pair! to be continued .......
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • FredPeyer

    Humor of the first degree!!!!!!!!!!!!
    d a, I salute you!

    • dusk arising

      Thanks fred, we're all pals still. Comic slur genre of poetry is now alive and well on MPS.

    • Frank Prem

      Great fun in this. well done.

      • dusk arising

        Thanks Frank.... lets have some laughs amongst our outpourings.

      • myself and me

        Mission impossible 5- Guilty ice cubes.
        Main character: Kat, San Tita-Nic
        Director: Dusk Arising

        • dusk arising

          Ah yes, i can hear the theme music now --- Roll Titles !!!

        • Michael Edwards

          Next episode please - great read and gave me a smile

          • dusk arising

            Next episode will be along any time soon.... but there are three authors each with their story to tell.

          • Goldfinch60

            Super write, can't wait for the next episode.

            • dusk arising

              Thanks Goldfinch.... may i quote to you the words of sage Kenny Everett "it's all in the best possible taste" (swiftly crosses legs).

            • Simple-Man87

              Very well written. Enjoyed from the start. Gripping, compelling, hilarious. Thank you for sharing.

              • dusk arising

                i suspect there will be several responses of humorous nature following along shortly..... i've a mind to start selling popcorn.

              • Seek

                This is masterful writing and sumptuous humor.

              • Neville

                an intriguing, humerous and compelling if not nail biting read with maybe just a tad of self woven in to the story line for good measure ... presumably the next episode is still available on catch up.....

                • dusk arising

                  I dont think the sequel ever got published. Sadly we rarely see Kay or Santita in MPS these days. We used to have a good laugh. Thanks for looking in on this forgotten piece of fun.

                  • Neville

                    Thoroughly enjoyed regardless & of course my pleasure sir.... Neville



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