Dusk arises as we find our main character
dry mouthed, and low on oxygen
cresting a yellow coral reef at 32 fathoms.
Kat Cousteau the renown undersea Diva
adjusts her poetic flippers for the final swim.
Before her stretches a hollow brick road
to the sunken wreck town of San Tita-nic
now an encrusted relic having gone down once to often
inhabited by every urchin from an ISIS-olease triangle
Kat is on a mission to bring back the guilty ice cubes.
They are to be tried for the sinking
of the supposedly unsinkable San Tita-nic.
and to finally set to rest the story that
14 members of the San Tita-nic's band
went down on her that fatal night.
In the dull light the graceful curves
of San Tita-nic's stern are still an awesome sight
whilst below the whispy curls of anenome conceal
where once was a magnificent screw
light fades around our shark infested wreck
as our hero closes in
Will Kat Cousteau complete her mission
Shall we ever know San Tita-nics hidden secrets
dont miss next weeks cunning episode.
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- Comment from author about the poem: a hurriedly thrown together revenge for the injustice done by this colluding pair! to be continued .......
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When's the book due out? I want an autographed copy. ; )
I feel that book may get black listed... or the ink floats off the soaking pages.
"MAY" get black listed. "MAY" get on the best seller list too. ; )
Humor of the first degree!!!!!!!!!!!!
d a, I salute you!
Thanks fred, we're all pals still. Comic slur genre of poetry is now alive and well on MPS.
Great fun in this. well done.
Thanks Frank.... lets have some laughs amongst our outpourings.
Mission impossible 5- Guilty ice cubes.
Main character: Kat, San Tita-Nic
Director: Dusk Arising
Ah yes, i can hear the theme music now --- Roll Titles !!!
Next episode please - great read and gave me a smile
Next episode will be along any time soon.... but there are three authors each with their story to tell.
Super write, can't wait for the next episode.
Thanks Goldfinch.... may i quote to you the words of sage Kenny Everett "it's all in the best possible taste" (swiftly crosses legs).
Very well written. Enjoyed from the start. Gripping, compelling, hilarious. Thank you for sharing.
i suspect there will be several responses of humorous nature following along shortly..... i've a mind to start selling popcorn.
This is masterful writing and sumptuous humor.
an intriguing, humerous and compelling if not nail biting read with maybe just a tad of self woven in to the story line for good measure ... presumably the next episode is still available on catch up.....
I dont think the sequel ever got published. Sadly we rarely see Kay or Santita in MPS these days. We used to have a good laugh. Thanks for looking in on this forgotten piece of fun.
Thoroughly enjoyed regardless & of course my pleasure sir.... Neville
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