WL Schuett

She Dances

back lit moon glow 

she shines 

dreamy and ethereal 

moving like the night 

she dances 

 

wisps of smoke 

an uninhibited fire 

a spark all aglow 

like smoke she curls 

a dance soft and slow 

 

a thousand nights 

from a time unknown 

the moon romances 

the spirit moves her 

and ... she dances 

Comments7

  • Michael Edwards

    I usually go for a walk round the village most nights but I've never seen her - oh woe is me!! Love the art and the poem Bill

    • WL Schuett

      If you've never seen her woe's the pity . I love my evening walks also , thanks Michael

    • Somerica

      Dude good peom.

      • WL Schuett

        Thanks somerica

      • Nicholas Browning

        This is very clever usage of imagery. You're a cool fellow, huh.
        Good work.
        Painting is also nice.

        • WL Schuett

          Thanks Nicholas I am just trying to be good poet / artist 😎

        • Accidental Poet

          Great correlation between pen and paint. I remember the Van Morrison song well. ; )

          • WL Schuett

            Thanks AP Van's still a favorite of mine

          • Goldfinch60

            That is a sublime poem WL, but that artwork just lie me away.

            • WL Schuett

              Thanks I did write this poem to go with this painting

              • Goldfinch60

                I have just re-read my comment and lie should have been blew.

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              • Santita

                A creative and beautiful write, W. I loved the line "like smoke she curls" just paints a vivid picture in the mind. another favorite. - and the painting matches perfectly.

                • WL Schuett

                  Santita sometimes an old painting like this just calls for some new life in this case a poem , Thanks

                • myself and me

                  Dance under the Moon, dance with fire glow, dance for hope, dance for dream, dance to free the soul.
                  Poem dance with the paint. Lovely.

                  • WL Schuett

                    M&M thanks for your poetic comment that captures the spirit of my poem

                    • myself and me

                      You are welcome. You painted so well. Every time, when I looked at your paint, there is something in it goes beyond my vision and catch me.



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