dark_energy

For the love of Autumn



The burnt golds and smoky reds blur into view,

The several shades of green disappear,

Quite like a loneliness I once knew,

It bloomed this summer my dear,

 

A bitter chill and your sweet scent sail in the breeze,

Shaky breaths and broken words float,

Fearful thoughts are put at ease,

Your whispers carry a musical note,

 

Puffs of smoke dissipate before my face,

A heavy hand rests on my knee, 

Leaves fall to the ground with untimely grace,

We bare all alongside the naked tree,

 

Cloudless skies, no veil to hide,

The suns rays cannot reach the flesh,

A new chapter reveals our fragile side,

Sharing warmth chest to chest,

 

Seated on a park bench in my lovers embrace,

Surrounded by a sea of autumn,

Summer forgotten without a trace,

The cold is not a problem

Comments6

  • Candlewitch

    hello,
    nice to meet you! this poem is extraordinarily lovely. the trees are turning in my area...into a riot of color! the gift of Autumn!

    *hugs, Cat

    • dark_energy

      Thank you so much! it really is a gift :D

    • WL Schuett

      Very cool poem nice imagery could see and feel autumn love how you brought it home snuggled into a lovers embraced to feel no chill ....fine art

      • dark_energy

        Really appreciate the feedback! Thank you:)

      • Louis Gibbs

        Enjoyed your poetic portrayal of a Fall Fling, de. Welcome to MPS!

        • dark_energy

          Thank you Louis !!!:)

        • Fay Slimm.

          So enjoyable this expression of autumnal love - -the chosen image really emphasizes the feel of the piece - - welcome to MPS - -look forward to reading more of your work.

          • dark_energy

            There were so many beautiful pictures to choose from haha thank you!

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! First let me congratulate you on its STRUCTURE Five balanced QUATRAINS and a consistent Rhyme Pattern ~ abab cdcd etc. This makes it perfect to recite ~ I am a Performance Poet ! The verbal content is perfect ans as good Love Poem should it shares a progressive love story Verse 1. Sets the Autumnal Scene and a blast from the past V2. The symbiosis of two Lovers V3, OMG I love this verse ! I once made love al~fresco and al nudo in the snow ! I caught a cold ~ but she was worth it ! V4. Progressive Love "sharing warmth chest to chest !" V5, Satiated by love ~ PERFECTION ! I know you will be an asset to MPS ! The way it works ~ if you enjoy certain Poets comment on their work and they will comment on yours and you can add them to your MPS Friends list OK ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B. Ohhhhh and thanks for your excellent autumnal photograph which resonates in perfect harmony with your elegant Poem ~ B,

            • dark_energy

              Wow what lovely and thorough feedback! Thank you for taking the time to analyse my poem:) I just wrote it as I saw it in my head, no planning or layout really haha but glad to see that it has a structure and good content.
              I aim to read as many poems as a I can on here :D thanks again

            • Goldfinch60

              Autumn is my favourite time of the year, the colours it produces are astounding. Welcome to MPS.



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