Autumn (Sedoka)


See Mother Nature
Newly Dressed in Autumn gear
Sounding summer's death bed knell

See Mother Nature
Filling animal pouches
Ready for winter's hard frost.


  • Candlewitch

    a great personification of Mother Nature!

    *hugs, Cat

    • sue.evans

      Thank you 😊

    • orchidee

      Good write Sue.

      • sue.evans

        Thank you 😊

      • Michael Edwards

        It's a great form and done full justice here - super stuff Sue

        • sue.evans

          Thank you fir great feedback 😊

        • Goldfinch60

          Good sedoka Sue, nature has many guises.

          • sue.evans

            Thank you😊 Yes it does and they all hold their own beauty and provide great material for creative writing!

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