FredPeyer

Thought

A thought flattened beneath

A thousand others

More important and more

Timely

 

A thought, not dead

Just barely

Surviving

Hanging on

 

Faintly hoping to

Be resurrected one day

To be brought back

Into glorious consciousness

 

A thought given up for dead

Lost in the system

With nobody looking or

Searching for it

 

But the day will come

When for whatever reason

That thought will be the

Most important of all thoughts

 

But by then it might be too late

Comments18

  • Goldfinch60

    Thoughts can often be misplaced never to be seen again. Good write Fred.

  • FredPeyer

    Thanks Goldfinch! Happens to me more and more!!! :-)

  • Michael Edwards

    Thoughts about poems but no pen to hand - soon forgotten - I'm there all the time - enjoyed the read Fred

    • FredPeyer

      Thanks so much Michael!

    • Angelica

      Ever since I joined this community, I feel I should wear a new necklace around my neck...pen and pad so I won't forget!
      I enjoy reading your pieces very much!
      Thank you

      • FredPeyer

        Thank you Angelica! A pen and pad would come handy sometimes!

        • Angelica

          When my children were in second grade and it was poetry month, they would say, \"Mommy, I don\'t know what to write when my teacher says, \'it\'s poetry time !\' \"
          My suggestion to them was to jot down words and/or ideas that were interesting to the in a pad! Have it with them at all times! Then, when the teacher would ask them to write a poem during the writing block period, they would thumb through their little pad 📝, choose an idea and start to write!
          PS- Their teacher liked that pad idea so much that one day, at dismissal, out came 28 smiling second graders displaying their
          new piece of jewelry
          they had made! What a splendid sight to behold!

        • virago

          I laughed as I finished reading because it reminds me of how often I lose a thought!!! Good write!

          • FredPeyer

            Thanks virago! I guess we are all in the same boat!

          • Frank Prem

            And the thought will be your poem Fred. Keep your notepad handy.

            • FredPeyer

              Thanks Frank! I have to admit that I don't carry any notepads around with me. Had some great ideas while driving, couldn't remember a thing by the time I got home!

              • Frank Prem

                It's always the way, Fred. Always. So many good poems adrift out there in the ether, for want of pen and paper.

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              • orchidee

                A fine write Fred. Was there ever any thoughts in me head to start with?! Are me lights on, but no one at home?! lol

                • FredPeyer

                  Thanks Orchidee! There are days where I feel like that exactly! And sometimes even the lights are out!

                • orchidee

                  Know what you mean - on occasions a poem may come from 'nowhere' but then forgotten. No pen and paper to hand.

                • Mugsdaddy

                  Excellent choice of topics. We all have those moments where the universe aligns all the pieces fall into place and we have these amazing ideas that will change the world. Then we commit them to memory only forget them behind the grocery list or the doctors appointment or... Or... A what was I talking about? Oh yea I need yogurt.
                  Mugsdaddy

                  • FredPeyer

                    Thanks Mugsdaddy! Yeah, It can get pretty hairy out there in poem thinking land! And if you don't forget, get some yogurt for me too!

                  • dusk arising

                    Ahhh thats one of those top of the stairs moments isn't it 'now what have i come upstairs for?'

                    • FredPeyer

                      Thanks da! Do you believe in the hereafter?
                      I do, every time I walk to the bedroom, stand there, and go "what am I here after?"

                    • Kat

                      Thought provoking and very true. It could be too late!

                      • FredPeyer

                        Thanks Kat, I hate it when I know, absolutely know, that there was something real good, but it's gone!

                      • Louis Gibbs

                        I had a fleeting thought on a clever response to this poem ... but, alas! You speak for us all, Fred.

                        • FredPeyer

                          Thank you Louis, great comment, LOL!

                        • Santita

                          Or one of the moments of "why did I come into the kitchen?" Lol. A very relatable piece, Fred - the man of any topic!

                          • FredPeyer

                            Mahalo Santi! Ending up in the kitchen is usually not too bad, no matter what, I grab something to eat!

                          • James Michael

                            Here's a thought bud, your coming around. Just let the words flow. I agree with Angelica; it's a good idea to always have pen and paper on you. I've been doing it for years.

                            • FredPeyer

                              Thanks James, after all these comments, I am going high tech and will be buying one of these small dictating recorders. Some of my best ideas come when driving where I cannot use pen and paper.

                              • James Michael

                                Cool. Great idea, I see so many people on their stupid phones driving. It is one of the leading causes of accidents. My commute is only 7 minutes and I don't have time for such nonsense. Although I spend too much time at work jotting down notes in my journal!

                              • WL Schuett

                                My memory sucks I always forget things and never seem to get back thoughts I've had and lost Definitely relate

                                • FredPeyer

                                  Thanks WL, I can relate! Usually have to hold my head sideways so the little bit of brain I have is all in one place!

                                • JaneEVE

                                  so true ,expressed well !

                                  • FredPeyer

                                    Thanks Jane, are you referring to the poem or to my comment to WL? Doesn't matter, either way is true!

                                    • JaneEVE

                                      well both read well!

                                    • myself and me

                                      Short lived thought vanished in the universe, no where to find.
                                      Today's thought has been saved here.

                                      • FredPeyer

                                        Wouldn't it be great to have a thought memory stick?

                                        • myself and me

                                          I am sure there will be one in the future, but even the memory stick is not reliable. If it broken, you would lost all your memories.

                                        • lasergraph

                                          Good piece. I have had many thoughts that just died of loneliness.

                                          • FredPeyer

                                            Thank you lasergraph, and the older I get the more I seem to loose!



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