Attack.
As sinks the cherry-plum sun
a hawk
unleashes his fire
and over naked-elm hill dives,
plume-tight,
!
!
!
straight downwards,
hangs in still air momentarily
wide-eyed and loose clawed
raptor then crashes
*!*
into a lone sparrow's chatter,
writing death warrant
**!**
*.*
*
in whitening dusk.
^^^^^^
^^^^
Weight of sudden attack
met success with
feathered explosion from
battle-high rush
of pitched buckle surprise.
* "" *
^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^
Grieving the slain I then spy
on moth-night's
distant and darkling horizon
a mate
~ - 0> almost stationary
in the ether
- -- - perhaps waiting
for brood's late feed
she, snatching bait in what
seems frenzy
quickly shoots tree-ward
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
before dark blackens sky
to ebony crystal.
As sinks the cherry-plum sun
I admit
that for chicks to exist
hunger has to be sated and
hawk's display,
!
!
by accurate awesome speed
of nature's raw
beauty invites recognition
for such fearless skill.
~ ~ ~
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Comments4
Good write Fay, nature can appear to be cruel but hawks kill to feed and not for fun like Homo sapiens.
A fine write Fay.
Superb work Fay
Great writing Fay! Sounds like a peregrine falcon, my favorite bird!
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