Sweet Nectar

WL Schuett

fold back the petals 

moist with first dew 

tempting , inviting 

opening for you 

 

deep down inside 

a life elixir 

dripping , pooling 

daring someone to kiss her 

 

caress the petals 

odoriferous delight 

sweet nectar awaits 

hover , drink 

then take flight 

 

  • Author: WL (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 14th, 2017 08:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: Painting and poem to the mystical elixir nectar and the hummingbird
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 506
  • Users favorite of this poem: myself and me, Accidental Poet, malubotelho
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  • Christina8

    I love this poem! Combined with the picture it adds to the beauty of it. Love the descriptive words you used and the rhymes. Awesome!

    • WL Schuett

      Thanks Christina I did try to meld the poem and painting

    • Michael Edwards

      Beautiful imagery both in words and in picture.

      • WL Schuett

        Thanks Michael

      • Seek

        Very sweet, even with no mention of honey. Beautiful write.

        • WL Schuett

          Funny I do have a poem about honey that's not quite finished

        • Tony36

          Awesome write

        • w c

        • w c

          ah yes, the hummingbird. a big bird in your poem

        • orchidee

          Good write WL.

        • FredPeyer

          WL, I love your poem (and the painting) not only because it is so well written, but because it conjures up additional imagery. On one hand there is the bird feeding on the flower and on the other hand there is tender lovemaking, beautifully expressed.

          • WL Schuett

            Exactly the essence of this Fred , thanks a fun poem to write

          • myself and me

            I wish I were the bird who got the elixir of life.
            Beautiful poem fits perfectly with the beautiful paint.

            • WL Schuett

              I have a feeling you're more like the flower 🌺 The giver , thanks M&M

            • Accidental Poet

              A marvelous write and painting made for each other. ; )

            • malubotelho

              You described nature so beautifully. I believe nature is a constant love making. So pure. Your painting is beautiful too.

            • Goldfinch60

              Beautiful write and great coherence with an amazing artwork.



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