The water and the rock

malubotelho

The still rock made a gracious move to receive the chilling embrace of the current water.
After the embrace the rock said; I will wait for your return, even if it takes years to happens.
The water went down riding the current, curving with every curve of the river, embracing other rocks, moving branches, caressing sands and grasses along the river.                                   It rode down on water falls, met the ocean,
greeted the fishes and other creatures, joined the big sea, were disposed with other water into a lake, helped create energy for a big city, were recycled many, many times. One day she travelled back into the river and was all excited to rapid touch the gracious curve of the still rock. For a moment they had a chilling romance.

  • Author: Malu (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 14th, 2017 09:14
  • Category: Fantasy
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  • Seek

    A poem that goes so well with that beautiful painting!

    • malubotelho

      Thanks, glad you like it. I appreciate your visit.

    • Michael Edwards

      There's quite a beauty about this one - good write Malu.

      • malubotelho

        Thanks Michael.

      • Fay Slimm.

        A lovely thought that the rock and water exchange contact - the picture too is superb as illustration of your poetic verse - great read Malu.

        • malubotelho

          Thank you Fay. I thought I had lost my inspiration about writing but it is coming back. I will getback.

        • FredPeyer

          A beautiful picture and a beautiful poem, Malu! Glad you are coming back to be your old creative self!

          • malubotelho

            Thanks Fred. Will get there. Better be a creative self than a complaining self, right?

          • dusk arising

            ooooh a deja vu moment Malubotelho. Great to see you writing again after the storm.

            • malubotelho

              Thanks Dusk. The storm is gone and we have to keep moving. Was not too bad for us.

            • Louis Gibbs

              I dig rocky love affairs. Enjoyed this one, Malu!

              • malubotelho

                Thanks Louis. Something lighter to relax.

              • myself and me

                A romantic moment about a lucky rock and a traveling water. The rock has embrace by a lot of water passing by, the water encounter other rocks on the way, and after a long trip, they met again.
                A romantic poem with a beautiful paint.

                • malubotelho

                  Thanks MM. Yes, it is romantic but it is no surprise with me. Like Santita says, I'm the queen of romance.

                  • myself and me

                    Yes, you are.

                  • WL Schuett

                    This is a wonderful poem I enjoyed the feeling of time and infinite return... did you paint this painting

                    • malubotelho

                      WLS. No, I did not. I'm far from painting like this. It is beautiful, right? I need to google to know who painted it.

                    • Accidental Poet

                      See? Even water and a rock can fall in love. Beautiful concept Malu ; )

                      • malubotelho

                        Thanks AP. Yes, it is to show that everything is possible in my imagination.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        The never ending circle of life very well expressed.



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