The Gambler

FredPeyer

He never touched cards

Never put a foot into a casino

Never bet on horses

Did not play the lottery

But he is a gambler

 

Got married at nineteen

Betting that his love

And the love of his girl

Would easily overcome

The 50% divorce rate

 

Always wanted to be

His own boss, control destiny

Betting he could beat

All the obstacles

And run his own business

 

Bought a large house

Expensive fast cars

Jewelry for his wife

Never once thinking the

Bank could foreclose

 

Waiting all alone

For his free meal

At the Salvation Army

Finally realizing

He had lost the gamble

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  • Michael Edwards

    Well I've never set foot in a casino, wouldn't have a clue how to bet on the horses and haven't the vaguest idea how to play any game of of cards whether or not playing for money (except snap with the kids that is) and what's more I haven't the faintest desire to partake in any of these activities. At least the odds are shortened in my favour - nice one Fred.

    • FredPeyer

      Thanks Michael, and that is what this poem is all about. While we don't have to be gamblers in what is usually understood as being a gambler, we gamble every day. From one of your comments I understand you brought 5 paintings to the gallery. Isn't that a gamble too? Hoping they would take all of them (which they actually did, right?). When you paint or write, you gamble that somebody will like it.

      • Michael Edwards

        Yes you are so right and it's been a good day for me - I did a painting for Cardinal Bo of Burma (just name dropping) a while back and I debated if it was wise to put it on the internet as it was quite a personal matter. Anyway I took a gamble and did so and it has just been spotted by someone and another commission for the same subject was received this morning. It has since started a whole string of unbelievable family coincidences which are still unravelling but that is another story.

      • WL Schuett

        It is said especially by my Mother back in the day that you shouldn't gamble with what you can't afford to lose ... but life's just not that simple is it .... good write Fred

        • FredPeyer

          Thank you WL, so true, but despite that, many people gamble with their lives, their future, their happiness, etc.

        • orchidee

          A fine write Fred.

          • FredPeyer

            Thank you orchidee, glad you liked it.

          • myself and me

            We are all gamblers in a sense on the life stage, and the stake is our future.
            This poem is bit heavy.

            • FredPeyer

              Thanks M&M, heavy as in.....?

              • myself and me

                debt.

              • Louis Gibbs

                A tough life-lesson well described in this one, Fred! Kudos.

                • FredPeyer

                  Thank you Louis, and many times we only realize the gamble by the time it is too late.

                • malubotelho

                  Wow Fred! The end surprised me. Was not expecting this. Great fun reading.

                  • FredPeyer

                    Thanks Malu, I am sure the guy waiting for his free meal was not expecting this kind of ending. But maybe it is not an ending, but a new beginning. You know the saying: Once you hit rock bottom, the only way is up!

                    • malubotelho

                      Yes, you are so right.

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      A poignant ending for the gambler who never touched cards Fred - a lesson in this perceptive write. Thanks for sharing.

                      • FredPeyer

                        Thanks Fay, you don't have to touch cards to either win or lose!

                      • dusk arising

                        sings:-
                        i used to be a big shot long time ago
                        had a cadillac and whole lotta doe
                        real fine women used to track me down
                        now not one o those girls can be found
                        i'm broke
                        stone cold broke
                        aint got a lousy dime
                        (not my words)

                        but everything we do is a gamble as you rightly point out, and not just for money.

                        • FredPeyer

                          Thanks da, you are right, most of the time it is NOT for money.

                        • Accidental Poet

                          Yes Fred, life is a gamble to which the outcome could go in many directions. But without some risk, life would be like living in windowless room and no way in or out. Like martina said, a calculated risk is attractive. Great write Fred. ; )

                          • FredPeyer

                            Thanks so much, AP, of course you are right. No risk, no fun. I used to race motocross, even though the risk is not as high as in roadracing, it was still there. Loved it though!

                          • Goldfinch60

                            This can be very true and seems to happen so often and possibly through no fault of their own. Good write.

                            • FredPeyer

                              Thank you Goldfinch, yes it does happen, but if it is through no fault of their own is questionable.

                              • Goldfinch60

                                A colleague of mine told me of one of his friends who had a very successful business but it went bust as he would supply services to customers but some of the customers just would not pay and the legal ways of trying to get the money were both time consuming and expensive - it became a Catch 22 situation.

                                • FredPeyer

                                  When you are in business, you have to be careful that you don't end up relying on one or two customers. If they don't pay your business my be in danger. This is one of the basic business rules and if you don't follow that, and you go down the drain you nobody to blame but yourself.



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