She Saved Me

Mugsdaddy

Darkness Falls across my eyes shrouding the pain concealing the lies 

It pulls me down where unconsciousness reigns it saps my life as my energy drains 

I welcome death as it slowly seeps in when this life is over something new will begin 

Just as I find myself opening death's door something pulls me to Consciousness and wakes me once more 

A vision an angel a goddess she must be she pulls me out of the darkness and breathes life into me 

Her hand holding mine I thank God for my life could she be the one finally a wife 

She senses I'm cold and pulls a coat from her pack it's white with bright buckles but wait are the sleeves in the back 

She puts me in a room with white padded walls she closes the padded door and disappears down the hall

So I sit here just drooling wearing a mischievous grin day after day waiting for death once again

  • Author: Mugsdaddy (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 23rd, 2017 04:46
  • Comment from author about the poem: Santita and I gave each other a topic to write about, mine was a being saved by a fair maiden... I don\\\'t think this was what she had in mind, but it works for me.
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Comments3

  • Mugsdaddy

    Thank you to Martina, I am glad you enjoyed it kind of a dark comedy. Hope you smiled.
    Mugsdaddy

  • Michael Edwards

    This reads so well and, yes, I smiled.

  • Goldfinch60

    Very good write, loved the ending.



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