So, here you are, a married man
I am no longer a fan
Where the hell was your ring?
You have broken a vow
So tell me somehow
Do you know how bad this stings?
I hope that you feel great
Did I properly satiate
all of your carnal, nasty desires?
After last we met
You can be glad I bet
That I didn't know you were a liar!
Well it's all out
I told your wife about
All the plans we had-you and I
Well I'm better than this
Can't believe I fell for your kiss
So this is my final goodbye!
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 26th, 2017 06:53
- Comment from author about the poem: If you didn't read "Adrenaline" this might not make sense to you. Keep in mind it is FANTASY. Thanks to Martina who encouraged a sequel!
- Category: Fantasy
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Comments7
WOW CHRIS ~ you told his Wife ! I'm glad I'm not a married Man ~ but of course our liaison is Academic (Poetic) and Spiritual which is why our Collaborations & Fusions are always so innocent & perfect. ANGELA knows all about you and knows you stimulate my ............ MUSE ! Also because you are a Nurse she knows you are an ANGEL ! Thanks for penning the sequel glad you found out he was cheating on his Wife before he got in too deep ~ even in Fantasy Land ! HUGS in the Spirit & MPS ~ BRIAN Hombre de Fe ! @@@@@@@
Well, it is based on the fantasy of yesterdays poem. But thanks for taking the time to read. Your comments were lovely! Thanks again! Hugs in the spirit--Christina
After last we met, you can be glad. Because this is my final good bye. Brilliant poem is shared here is really very amazing.
Thanks Pintu. I appreciate your compliments on my fantasy poem.
Wonderful sequel and righting a wrong.
Thank you Goldfinch. I think this is my last fantasy poem. Fun, but I like to base my poetry on real life. Appreciate the comment!
Fitting good bye to the liar ... well done Christina
Thanks so much WL! Appreciated the compliment!
"can't believe I fell for your kiss." I loved this line. A kiss says so much yet its intention is often misconstrued. I loved this (and pt1) Thank you for sharing.
Thanks for reading. Can't wait to get back to reality! LOL I so appreciate the wonderful reply!
That guy is soooo lucky to live in a fantasy world! Losing girlfriend and wife the same day would have been tough! 🙂
Great sequel, Christina!
Thank you for your follow up and praise for this fantasy write! I really appreciate the compliment!
Awesome conclusion to part 1 Christina. Great writing on fantasyland.
Thank you so much. I appreciate the kind compliment!
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