DISJOINTED LOVE ~ A GHAZAL

BRIAN & ANGELA

 

 

PLEASE SPARE A THOUGHT FOR WEEPING ~ WILLOW

ALL SHE'S GOT LEFT IS HER LOVER'S ~ HEART SHAPED PILLOW

 

I did my best to love HANGARED

Who wore more clothes ~ when she was in bed !

Her Body was ten degrees below

Her DADDY'S name was S K MO !

 

A Perfect Girl ~ my Girl Friend HEATHER

Alas we could not cum together

However much we tried and tried

Our love was never synchronised ! 

 

The 50 shapes the KS listed

Raised my LIBIDO ~ but my Lass resisted

My hopes were dashed with ELOISE

Her Mum & Dad were Mission-narries

 

SIZE MATTERS to Ladies I realised

Each "Tunnel of Love" has a different size

MAN's Mantra is as I recall

Lie back ~ enjoy ~ ONE SIZE FITS ALL !

 

BUBBLES was my Perfect Girl

Never fast and never slow

Her outfits made my Heart a-twirl

Til I discovered she's a HO !

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ LOVE ~ BRIAN XOX 

 

GHAZALS originated in Persia and sread too INDIA and other

Asian Countries.  An ENGLISH GHAZAL is written in "Rhyming

Couplets" and dwells on the theme of "Unrequited Love". I have

blended my couplets into Quatrains because each one tells a

Salutary Tale.  Like my Friend who fell in love with a Girl on the

WWW and then discovered she lived in WINNIPEG (CANADA)

and wanted to stay near her Parents if she married !  See my

Verse about HANGARED !  Apologies to Canadian Girls they are

really HOT under their electric blankets !  Love to All ~ BRIAN XOX      

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 27th, 2017 00:03
  • Category: Love
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  • Louis Gibbs

    You and Santita are on fire this morning, B! Very clever.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Thanks LOUIS ~ I've added a lot more verses please check ~ Yours BRIAN

    • orchidee

      Oh heck, this should be 18+, seeing as I'm sometimes telling people off for not ticking the 18+ box! I do it for my own sake too, to reduce the swoons.
      Not at this time of the (UK) morning surely, Brian?! heehee.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks STEVE ~ Perhaps that should be 70+ If you can no longer compete with bright Young things like SANTI & I ? Thanks for your droll comment ~ it was composed last night to post this morning and compete with SANTI etc for Pole Position. Send me a Doctors note and in future i will delay until NOON to post ! Yours concerned ! BRIAN

      • Christina8

        This piece was really well written and parts of it made me giggle too! This is one of your saucier writes, which I like! Really great job! Hugs-Christina

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          HI SWEETHAERT ~ Pleased it rang your bell ! YES i did stir in a bit of CHILLI which seems to be par fro the course TODAY ! Pleased you enjoyed the heat & innocent fun ! HOT HUGS for You ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@@

        • orchidee

          But seriously, it should be marked 18+. You'll get shot, leading under 18's astray! oohh.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            OK STEVE ~ You can stop blowing your REFEREES whistle ~ I've upgraded (or should that be downgraded ?) it to "18" ~ Now you will have to read it once again to make doubly sure ! I only ask one thing in return ~ that you add a Poem to my latest FUSION about LADIES ~ OK ~ Yours BRIAN

            • orchidee

              Did I only say it, cos I wanted to read the poem again?! heehee. Well, I dunno about the Fusion poem. I might never get to the end without a swoon!

            • Michael Edwards

              Thankfully I'm just over 18 and can read this - nice one Brian

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                Thanks MICHAEL ~ I am pleased it appeals to your SENSE of HUMOUR it appears to have triggered
                Steve's HUME of SENSOR ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Latest Fusion on Ladies ~ Yours BRIAN.

              • FredPeyer

                Brian, while very well written (and funny!), and containing the original subject matter of a Ghazal (love, separtion, pain of love), it does not seem to follow the original form of couplets with the second line rhyming with the original stanza.
                But hey, as a poet you have artistic freedom, and no matter what, I do love it!

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  Thanks FRED ~ Poetic Licence indeed ! For me the Subject (message) of the POEM is more important than the Structure. That was the principal I adopted here ~ OK Thanks for you comment and enjoyment ~ BRIAN the BARD !

                • marielababy

                  new here and I already love your poetry , it's just so stunning!!!

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    THANKS MARIE ~ I do my best to please ~ Yours BRIAN



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