PLEASE SPARE A THOUGHT FOR WEEPING ~ WILLOW
ALL SHE'S GOT LEFT IS HER LOVER'S ~ HEART SHAPED PILLOW
I did my best to love HANGARED
Who wore more clothes ~ when she was in bed !
Her Body was ten degrees below
Her DADDY'S name was S K MO !
A Perfect Girl ~ my Girl Friend HEATHER
Alas we could not cum together
However much we tried and tried
Our love was never synchronised !
The 50 shapes the KS listed
Raised my LIBIDO ~ but my Lass resisted
My hopes were dashed with ELOISE
Her Mum & Dad were Mission-narries
SIZE MATTERS to Ladies I realised
Each "Tunnel of Love" has a different size
MAN's Mantra is as I recall
Lie back ~ enjoy ~ ONE SIZE FITS ALL !
BUBBLES was my Perfect Girl
Never fast and never slow
Her outfits made my Heart a-twirl
Til I discovered she's a HO !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ LOVE ~ BRIAN XOX
GHAZALS originated in Persia and sread too INDIA and other
Asian Countries. An ENGLISH GHAZAL is written in "Rhyming
Couplets" and dwells on the theme of "Unrequited Love". I have
blended my couplets into Quatrains because each one tells a
Salutary Tale. Like my Friend who fell in love with a Girl on the
WWW and then discovered she lived in WINNIPEG (CANADA)
and wanted to stay near her Parents if she married ! See my
Verse about HANGARED ! Apologies to Canadian Girls they are
really HOT under their electric blankets ! Love to All ~ BRIAN XOX
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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Comments7
You and Santita are on fire this morning, B! Very clever.
Thanks LOUIS ~ I've added a lot more verses please check ~ Yours BRIAN
Oh heck, this should be 18+, seeing as I'm sometimes telling people off for not ticking the 18+ box! I do it for my own sake too, to reduce the swoons.
Not at this time of the (UK) morning surely, Brian?! heehee.
Thanks STEVE ~ Perhaps that should be 70+ If you can no longer compete with bright Young things like SANTI & I ? Thanks for your droll comment ~ it was composed last night to post this morning and compete with SANTI etc for Pole Position. Send me a Doctors note and in future i will delay until NOON to post ! Yours concerned ! BRIAN
This piece was really well written and parts of it made me giggle too! This is one of your saucier writes, which I like! Really great job! Hugs-Christina
HI SWEETHAERT ~ Pleased it rang your bell ! YES i did stir in a bit of CHILLI which seems to be par fro the course TODAY ! Pleased you enjoyed the heat & innocent fun ! HOT HUGS for You ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@@
But seriously, it should be marked 18+. You'll get shot, leading under 18's astray! oohh.
OK STEVE ~ You can stop blowing your REFEREES whistle ~ I've upgraded (or should that be downgraded ?) it to "18" ~ Now you will have to read it once again to make doubly sure ! I only ask one thing in return ~ that you add a Poem to my latest FUSION about LADIES ~ OK ~ Yours BRIAN
Did I only say it, cos I wanted to read the poem again?! heehee. Well, I dunno about the Fusion poem. I might never get to the end without a swoon!
Thankfully I'm just over 18 and can read this - nice one Brian
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I am pleased it appeals to your SENSE of HUMOUR it appears to have triggered
Steve's HUME of SENSOR ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Latest Fusion on Ladies ~ Yours BRIAN.
Brian, while very well written (and funny!), and containing the original subject matter of a Ghazal (love, separtion, pain of love), it does not seem to follow the original form of couplets with the second line rhyming with the original stanza.
But hey, as a poet you have artistic freedom, and no matter what, I do love it!
Thanks FRED ~ Poetic Licence indeed ! For me the Subject (message) of the POEM is more important than the Structure. That was the principal I adopted here ~ OK Thanks for you comment and enjoyment ~ BRIAN the BARD !
new here and I already love your poetry , it's just so stunning!!!
THANKS MARIE ~ I do my best to please ~ Yours BRIAN
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