I saw the theatre of love
saw lovers jumping into play
words were floating around
eyes were they display.
Men and women laughing loud
music went into survey
bodies trying to engage
minds trying to obey.
As the night follows course
things came into decay
love took new position
love theatre was to stay.
Laying hands, playing games
I saw love as an essay
each scene evolving theme
each finding a better way
to conquer a love routine
to get paid or to pay.
- Author: Malu (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: September 29th, 2017 10:09
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Good write Malu.
Thank you so much Orch.
Love the essence of this one ... the theater of love, actors engaging. Well done , Malu!
Thanks Louis. Sometimes we play at the love theatre or we watch a piece coming through.
Beautiful write Malu I can conjure up the scene.
Thanks Michael.
Your penned the scene so well I could see that love theatre too - -- a really enjoyable read Malu.
Thanks Fay. It is something to think about. I appreciate you reading.
Malu, you reminded me with this lovely poem that we really are all actors on the stage of life. And you did what all good writers do: You took in an actual scene and made it into something beautiful, exciting, and meaningful with your imagination. Something to think about.
Thank you Fred. In life either we play or we watch the play. And sometimes we can do both. Be in play and watch it and write about.
Great write
Thanks Tony
Welcome
Very original nicely written good poem Malu
Thank you so much. Glad you liked.
Good write, may that theatre of love continue to flourish.
Thanks Gold.
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