malubotelho

Love theatre 🎭

I saw the theatre of love
saw lovers jumping into play
words were floating around
eyes were they display.

 

Men and women laughing loud
music went into survey
bodies trying to engage
minds trying to obey.

 

As the night follows course
things came into decay
love took new position
love theatre was to stay.

 

Laying hands, playing games
I saw love as an essay
each scene evolving theme
each finding a better way
to conquer a love routine
to get paid or to pay.

Comments11

  • orchidee

    Good write Malu.

    • malubotelho

      Thank you so much Orch.

    • Santita

      Queen of Romance, this is a such a cool write! The theme is so unique & well delivered, I am impressed by the thought you put into this.The rhyme & metaphor are great. Lovely work, my dear.

      • malubotelho

        Thanks Santita. Went to a bar restaurant last night and could not just be there but to observe people. Some were truly playing in the love theatre. Thus the idea.

      • Louis Gibbs

        Love the essence of this one ... the theater of love, actors engaging. Well done , Malu!

        • malubotelho

          Thanks Louis. Sometimes we play at the love theatre or we watch a piece coming through.

        • Michael Edwards

          Beautiful write Malu I can conjure up the scene.

          • malubotelho

            Thanks Michael.

          • Fay Slimm

            Your penned the scene so well I could see that love theatre too - -- a really enjoyable read Malu.

            • malubotelho

              Thanks Fay. It is something to think about. I appreciate you reading.

            • Candlewitch

              amazing and inspirational write, malu! very well thought out!

              *hugs, Cat

              • malubotelho

                Thanks Cat. Something a little different. Glad you enjoyed it.

              • FredPeyer

                Malu, you reminded me with this lovely poem that we really are all actors on the stage of life. And you did what all good writers do: You took in an actual scene and made it into something beautiful, exciting, and meaningful with your imagination. Something to think about.

                • malubotelho

                  Thank you Fred. In life either we play or we watch the play. And sometimes we can do both. Be in play and watch it and write about.

                • Tony36

                  Great write

                  • malubotelho

                    Thanks Tony

                    • Tony36

                      Welcome

                    • WL Schuett

                      Very original nicely written good poem Malu

                      • malubotelho

                        Thank you so much. Glad you liked.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Good write, may that theatre of love continue to flourish.

                      • malubotelho

                        Thanks Gold.



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