Your wine soaked kisses
Set my heart afire
Kindling lost feelings
Setting hopes ever higher
I just met you here at the bar
Looking so lonely and sad
Triggering the biggest
Emotions I think I ever had
I wanted to save you
And hold you so tight
Hug and protect you
With all of my might
We started to talk
And I moved near
You had some more wine
And I ordered beer
With tears in your eyes
You talked about him
How he cheated on you
And the story turned grim
I put my arm around you
With a napkin dried your tears
Gently kissed your wet lips
To allay all your fears
That’s how it started
The best part of my life
Because I did save her
And make her my wife
- Author: Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 2nd, 2017 17:37
- Comment from author about the poem: Another imaginary situation
- Category: Love
- Views: 61
- Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
Comments7
Interesting write. It flowed so well. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you! Actually, I always wanted to write a country song and this is as close as I got so far.
I love this write! It's hard to imagine that it's fantasy! Great job! Flowed very well!
Thanks Christina, I don't hang around in bars, so I had to use my imagination!
Fiction? Or non-fiction? That seems to be the question. But what's important is the answer in the outcome from this meeting of hearts. ; )
Thank you AP. People meet in the strangest places, but there is something about a bar that seems to fuel the imagination.
I always suspected that you were the white knight type. I enjoyed this tale of chivalry, Fred!
Thanks Louis, and all that's missing is the horse! 🙂
Written by a real poet - well done Fred
Thank you Michael, coming from you, high praise indeed. And I didn't have to count neither words nor syllables! 🙂
Fine work there Fred. Well done you.
Thanks so much, Frank!
Good write, your imagination is very creative.
Thanks Goldfinch! All of us here on MPS have very creative imaginations!!!
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