I will never forget first time I saw this guy
time has rolled over, time has passed by,
I can meet a thousand lovers
I can love a thousand times
but will never forget
the sparkle shining light of his enticing blue eyes.
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Author:
Malu (Pseudonym) (
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This is short but lovely and interesting !!
Marie, thanks. Memories lives with us forever. This is one of my memories.
Who wouldn't fall for those stunning eyes! A well written tribute to an unforgettable love, Malu!
Thanks Louis. It is funny that this person will never know about this. Well, this is life.
a blue eyed lovers poem. sweet.
Thanks Kevin, a sweet blue eyed poem
Look into my eyes sweet lady.
Send me a picture and I see if I can fall in love with your eyes. I never stop falling in love.
After reading your impressive poem, Malu, I got myself a pair of stunningly blue contact lenses. Will let you know if it helped!
You are a cute. I'm sure your wife is going to fall in love for you again. Unless she does not like blue eyes.
A short but wonderful write malu. I bet he's missing you too. ; )
Ah AP. I don't think so because it is so long ago. Probably if I would meet him now I could not even recognize him. But I can think that maybe and only maybe he could eventually think about me. Thanks for your lovely comments.
Well, you never know malu. It would not surprise me that he remembers you with a fondness that haunts him every night and day. Who knows, he may even be here on MPS writing poetry. As they say, truth can be stranger than fiction. ; )
Lol 😂 you made me laugh now. And I like that truth can be stranger than fiction.
One thing I know, he is not here on MPS but maybe he thinks about me. You know how we poet have such an imagination. I one day thought I was going to write a book and would go to my city there in Brazil where he is suppost to live and them the night of promotion of my book he would be there and he would know that was me and probably he would be on my story. Well, just this story could be a romance, right? So funny 😂
I say write the book with some kind of confirmation that only he would know he is a character in the book. ; )
Ok, the book is going to be called BLUE EYES
I'll be looking for it in the best seller section of the book stores. ; )
You are a sweet. Thank you 😊
You're very welcome. ; )
An enchanting piece of work - long may the memory live.
Thanks Michael. It is a cherished memorie. Sweet as marmalade.
Good write. There are some things in life that are just unforgettable.
Yes Goldie. People says we are more attached to bad memories but not me. Why remember the bad. I like to keep good memories. A good memorie can save you in down times. Thanks for reading. Lovely comments
The eyes are the window to the soul . Nice poem 🙂
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