Blue eyes

I will never forget first time I saw this guy
time has rolled over, time has passed by,
I can meet a thousand lovers
I can love a thousand times
but will never forget
the sparkle shining light of his enticing blue eyes.


  • marielababy

    This is short but lovely and interesting !!

    • malubotelho

      Marie, thanks. Memories lives with us forever. This is one of my memories.

    • Louis Gibbs

      Who wouldn't fall for those stunning eyes! A well written tribute to an unforgettable love, Malu!

      • malubotelho

        Thanks Louis. It is funny that this person will never know about this. Well, this is life.

      • kevin browne

        a blue eyed lovers poem. sweet.

        • malubotelho

          Thanks Kevin, a sweet blue eyed poem

        • dusk arising

          Look into my eyes sweet lady.

          • malubotelho

            Send me a picture and I see if I can fall in love with your eyes. I never stop falling in love.

          • FredPeyer

            After reading your impressive poem, Malu, I got myself a pair of stunningly blue contact lenses. Will let you know if it helped!

            • malubotelho

              You are a cute. I'm sure your wife is going to fall in love for you again. Unless she does not like blue eyes.

            • Accidental Poet

              A short but wonderful write malu. I bet he's missing you too. ; )

              • malubotelho

                Ah AP. I don't think so because it is so long ago. Probably if I would meet him now I could not even recognize him. But I can think that maybe and only maybe he could eventually think about me. Thanks for your lovely comments.

                • Accidental Poet

                  Well, you never know malu. It would not surprise me that he remembers you with a fondness that haunts him every night and day. Who knows, he may even be here on MPS writing poetry. As they say, truth can be stranger than fiction. ; )

                • 6 more comments

                • Michael Edwards

                  An enchanting piece of work - long may the memory live.

                  • malubotelho

                    Thanks Michael. It is a cherished memorie. Sweet as marmalade.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Good write. There are some things in life that are just unforgettable.

                    • malubotelho

                      Yes Goldie. People says we are more attached to bad memories but not me. Why remember the bad. I like to keep good memories. A good memorie can save you in down times. Thanks for reading. Lovely comments

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