Christina8

With You

There was a time I didn't know

just how much you loved me so

I didn't take care of me

I wandered through this life

bitter, thinking of all the pain and strife

I'll tell you, it was a scary place to be

Now that I'm aware

Of how much you do care

Life is a much better place

I look forward to each day

And the kind things you will say

Knowing it has not been a waste

I try to make the day

better in every way

I finally have my chance and it is now

The bad times are behind me

And right now, finally

I made it through, with you, somehow

 

Comments10

  • orchidee

    A fine write Christina.

    • Christina8

      Thanks so much orchidee!

    • Fay Slimm.

      A beautiful confession of realized love Christina - - a lovely read.

      • Christina8

        I appreciate the compliment Fay!

      • Goldfinch60

        Good loving write, may your life together remain constant and happy.

        • Christina8

          Thank you GF! Thanks for the good wishes!

        • malubotelho

          Yes Christina, a write more like a confession of tender love. Love can cure many illnesses. Specially from our mind and spirit. Wishing you all the best.

          • Christina8

            I appreciate the well wishes! I do believe love conquers all. Thanks again!

          • Poetic Dan

            Brilliant, i try not to use the mirror now days but I may have to now ;)

            • Christina8

              Thanks Dan! I appreciate the read. i really like your comment!

            • FredPeyer

              I just hope you did show him this poem, Christina! This is a beautiful declaration of love.

              • Christina8

                Yes I did! He loved it! Thanks for your kind reply!

              • WL Schuett

                Very honest and personal poem , good for you your realization and being able to change is inspiring...

                • Christina8

                  Thank you so much WL! I really appreciate your compliment!

                • Simple-Man87

                  This is beautiful. Sometimes it is very hard to not see how much you are loved. It's convincing ourselves, that is the hardest. Well done.

                  • Christina8

                    Thank you SM for your wonderful reply. And yes, that is so true!

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    AMEN CHRISTINA ! God created us Male & Female to be together in love & harmony supporting each other ! I am so pleased that you found your Soul Mate at the beginning of this turbulent Century ! This has made your Life much less turbulent and much more bearable for You & Your Husband & Children ! GOD IS GOOD ~ Heavenly Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@

                    • Christina8

                      Thanks for your reply and compliments on this! I so appreciate it!--Christina

                    • Neville

                      this is a fine example of a love song penned by one who doubts them self but who really has no need to ... Nice one C8...

                      • Christina8

                        How about Part 2? I really appreciate your kind review by the way!!......C

                        • Neville

                          my word she has an appetite....



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