Narrow Escape.

Goldfinch60

 

MPS has lot to answer for,

It nearly put me in the doghouse.

So involved in reading the poems

Had I become

That the time just flew by.

I looked up

And saw the time,

I was five minutes late,

An absolute tragedy.

I was late with my wife’s morning tea!

I made the brew

And with great trepidation

Took it up to her,

But all was well,

She was still asleep.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 14th, 2017 01:25
  • Comment from author about the poem: Every morning for the past 36 years I have taken tea to my wife in bed at 7:15, I only occasionally am late.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 74
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • Mugsdaddy

    Saved by the snooze button.

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    AMEN ANDY ~ All's well that ends well ~ you set a high standard for all Husbands ( and would~be Husbands) to follow ! I won't let ANGELA read this one ! Yours BRIAN

  • FredPeyer

    Goldfinch, if all husbands would be like you, the world would be a better place!

  • Fay Slimm.

    This raised a Saturday smile Goldi - glad you found eyes closed with that over-late cuppa.

    • Goldfinch60

      If i have made you smile I am happy, making people smile is one of my aims in life.

    • rrodriguez

      Very sweet and elegant. Thank you for sharing

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you RR my pleasure.

      • WL Schuett

        A little humor to start the day, thanks !

        • Goldfinch60

          Humour is good for us all.

        • Accidental Poet

          I'm reminded of the old saying,
          "If a tree falls in the forest and no one's there to hear it, does it make a sound?"
          With her cup of tea at bedside, all she'll know is that you thought of her with love. ; )

          • Goldfinch60

            That is a good analogy AP, thank you.

          • Christina8

            You are so sweet in taking you wife tea in bed. I used to get tea in the afternoon but no more. Oh well. So glad you've kept on. A sweet write!

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Christina, I will always keep doing it.

            • Louis Gibbs

              MPS is compelling, I agree. Nice write, Goldie.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Louis, so true about MPS.

              • orchidee

                Oh lol, good write Gold. I thought you was late cos you was busy doing final packing for 1066!

              • MendedFences27

                I had to laugh! I read this just after bringing her morning tea. I guess we all spend too much time on MPS. Better she gets a great start in the morning, than be cranky all day. Loved this bit of humor. - Phil A.

                • Goldfinch60

                  So true Phil, so true. Thank you.

                • orchidee

                  Cooeeee, let's have a good evening at Hastings! Many from MPS there that we recognise? Some relatives of mine ARE actually there this weekend! lol.



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